The Docks

I'm brand new to forums, first time posting. This is my first attempt at doing terrain, i'm a noobie at this terrain stuff, took me an hour how to get rolling hills, o.o. Tell me what you think and what I could do to improve! Thanks! :D

R u serious? this is what u actually posted lol... theres only 2 words that can describe this....thing.... HOLY SHIT! there support columns right? very clever. id like to see the holy city with the dock. if u want to know what can make it look better... make more rocks around waterfall but like make them look more conspicuos. not so much bordering but thats just where the wterfall rolls down.

see people this just goes to show you, you dont need custom models to make shit look good, just be creative.

*wonders what the spell breaker is thinking*

Excellent dock

Thank you for the comments, :)! I took your advice and added a few rocks to the waterfall, it looks a lot better now, and more natural. The rocks surrounding it are supposed to act like a natural river/waterfall formation. Again, thank you for comments! Heres some screenies of how it looks now, not much changed, but it looks better than before ^_^

Hahahahahaha... LOL...

Dude if you are a noob then your the best noob i've ever seen...
Nice work! perhaps adding some more pier's though...

Mozared

still needs more rocks on the left side, basicly if u can see the edge of the doddad then ur not done, looking good btw

o btw change the area by the cliff on the waterfall......too flat

wow, nice work, i like waterfall

If you over do the rocks your gonna ruin the whole water fall scene. o_O

Dude, if that's your first, I'm a Gnome. That is friggin awsome.

MAN!!! You just CAN'T be a noob. that is so awsome :o
If you are a noob then your a fast lerning noob (or it's just a gift)

He's not a noob, even if he considers himself one. I think he's just new to forums not terraining.

Yeah maby.
But still, it's cool ^_^

I actually am quite new to terraining, I just looked at other people's work and tried to mimic what they did in my own way. ^_^ I'm also new to forums, o.o i'm a nub! Thank you for the comments/constructive crits! Gonna try what you all said and see how it looks

yes i agree, but you can the the edge of the water.......at least raise the land so u dont see the edge of the doddad

Only tip i have is that it's a bit akward... on the right side we have a civilized dock and on the left site some overgrown jungle waterfall... doesn't fit together.. perhaps if you made the waterfall more unnatural, so i mean removing trees on both sides and placing some village there 2...

Mozared