something, cant think a title for this (WIP)

yea... i cant thinki of a title for this but its somethign that im working on.

working on a bit on forshadowing but i think i messed up on the foot.

here's the lineart. i think thats what you may call it. DONE WITH A MOUSE!!


and here's my progress on it. trying out different techniques. and yea....

Thats awesome, done with a mouse too! I love those boots! awesome!

the cape could use some details. now it's like a weird hole'd cheez. i do know archimonde have a cape like that but it's only a model..
i like how there is two persons fighting, but the ennemy could use his hand to do a deadly slice on his oppenant's throat. it doesnt look like a harsh kick but the ennemy is shocked in front of the sloppy kick. the attacker have his hand on his hat. why? he should his arms to balance him. gymnatists and football players use their arms as a balancer. but this misses a lot of shading,normally the leg of the attacker should do a huge shadow over the attacked one. did i mentionned the kick doesn't look like spectactular? i can't say anything negative anymore...apart maybe the fact of the attacked person's head ( visible part ) looks like one of a squirell. you can fix that.

Call it ''Sandro missing a kick on a weak foe that likes seeing hatgrabbers"

Pretty cool death... pretty cool.

You messed up on Sandro's foot... you know that though... and that kick really looks like it lacks any force. And how is Sandro balancing like that? Why is he grabbing his hat?

Interesting start on the colors... I like where this is going.

icbm1987

heh, "hat grabbers"

my dad pointed out to me about the kick like, when i was done inking IT! so yea.

at least i know whats wrong,


and the hat, orignally i meant to make Sandro a bit tilted, and in order to keep his hat on, he had to hold it so yea.

finished coloring Sandro and starting to color on the Royal Guard


EDIT: You messed up a tag

hmmm... it looks like a round house kick to the nads to me, and the marine's right foot is missing (its suppose to be partially covered)

i gotta learn to draw me some boots

very nicely done with a mouse, u must use the mouse a lot to get sumthing like that

I really like the fact that you have defined character concepts and use em alot. I can't redraw stuff since I find it boring to redraw something based on something you've already put on paper.
But I think you don't bore yourself since you want to make a comic right?
First off, for something drawn with a mouse... that's friggin awesome. Since it was drawn with a mouse I wont bother you with details since you've put enough in the pic already. I like the pose of both characters very much. Sandro's feet on the ground should be more tilted to our left but apart from that he's good. I justify the fact that he holds his hat cuz he wanna keep being cool all da time and no1 wants to c his bald head ^^. The missing marine right leg is kinda weird but apart from that the drawing is really good.
The colouring looks good so far good job! d(^o^)b

BLEH XP, i cant even draw that well, let alone use the damned mouse that well...

sandro's kneepad and boots (the one hes kickin with) need some more shine/detail