Just a Vampire!!

I had to draw a vampire, i bough bloodrayne yesterday (very cool game and extremely violent) make me want to draw vampire!!! srry for the size too forgot to make it smaller but im lazy now so...

I dunno its kinda nice but it seems strange, the nose is weirdly looking and the face seems flat... no offence dude

i second that, the nose have a weird shape..and her eyehairs too pronounced, normally it shouldnt be noticed. also there is poor shading, i dont even think there's an oriented lightsource.
her lower jaw only have square teeths, and the upper jaw have a big error. the 2nd teeth is pointy, while its supposed to be the third. there is first square, another square, then a pointy teeth, and then they begin to be big and have 3 teeths. and i think theres way too much piercings, this isn't a fashion vampire. also theres no shading in her mouth, its like if she have a huge hole in her mouth and we can see thru her body. put a toungue, and a background in her mouth. also that big sludge of blood seems unrealistic, blood won't draw like that. and her huge clothes, would have offered possibility to do folds, but there is none, wich is almost impossible if someone wears a regular dress on him/her the person will have folds fo sho.
hairs are the only place where there is shading...well atleast the hairs are not white.

1- The nose isnt big enugh thats why its weird, beside that its my learning part... still have work to do
2- The teeths um yea i kinda forgot looking at a vampire reference or sumthing b4
3- There was shading but its gone cause of the brightness i ajusted in my scanner (my pic was so dirty)
4-Clothing should have been latex but couldnt find any place to put 'corectly' the light
5- Tongue thing, i just really forgot lol
6- Piercing sounds fine to me there is 1 eyebrow, 1 in nose and the ears they look ok

Edit: omg i just noticed a mistake, one of the eyebrown is in the wrong way