Into Screen for a mod I'm making

I am making a mod called WarHack and made this intro screen with a black ink pen and edited it in Paint Shop Pro 7, what do you think?

nice and weird but you should really work on eyes, triangles = no, just no

Yeah the eyes are horrible atm and try adding sumtin to the background :D

I love it. it has a nice style.

It would be awesome if u could animate them.

i see black and yellow and red dots...

U probably stood up too fast.



Is it acctually possible to have a flash animated loading screen? I would love to see that thing move and make funny noises.

yes it is, such as http://www.cybermoonstudios.com/ has a flash intro screen...

but in war3 no

Do only two people hate the triangle eyes? I don't really plan to change them but I may brighten the backdrop, problem is, is that I work on an LCD moniter with is much brighter then the CRTs most people use.

ah now that im at home i see it correctly.
very cool... yes make the eyes glow and add a title

not that i hate triangles, if you add glow it will be fine but just a triangle like that and totally red (no shading) even a 5 years old child can make triangle red eyes and actually they bring the picture down. glow will have a nasty effect

I blured all the eyes, they should not look just like thay have no shading, however there are a few that could be better, are the eyes that bug you the 3 bottem left creatures? or do other eyes bother you too? I don't think any on the right look bad or the top left monster.

here is a link to the original:
http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/art/s/...ginal.jpg.html

elfwood... grrr...
I saw your face ^^ lol

Elfwood... tried joinin that twice... got bored with the questions and answered randomly (on both tries) and was refused :p no actually the first try I forgot one question and they sent me back to the begginning...

I'd say give the eyes way more definition, I'm going to agree and say that any five year old could do the same thing. Another thing is that the eyes are fairly large compared to the heads of your creatures. Also the right side looks much better than the left IMO, I personally think both sides should have been even in size because it seems you got the inspiration from the warcraft loading screen that Samwise did.

Then as Candy said... Elfwood is a bitch to get into, I gave up. I'd rather not study for 2 hours to get on Elfwood. Anyone have the answers?