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Burning Blade!

07-03-2004, 07:13 PM#1
Murloc Lover
Just a random sketch, i need some tips etc.

and YES, the grass IS there because i can't draw feet.
07-03-2004, 09:34 PM#2
Shadow_Strike
his feet seem a tad... short
07-04-2004, 12:47 AM#3
Murloc Lover
yeah i thought that but then his legs ARE bent, and theres a lil bit more room beneath the grass :P
07-04-2004, 11:30 AM#4
Murloc Lover
:\ no-one even bothers to reply?

I love these art forums.
07-04-2004, 01:41 PM#5
Muoteck
Except for his pants with strange folds, weird face expression (he looks like peon óO) and lack of shaading i cant find anything i could crit :D
07-04-2004, 02:55 PM#6
Count_Carigon
before i make my comment, (because this has a lot to do with how i will respond) are you going for a Warcraft style orc or just an orc in general.
07-04-2004, 05:30 PM#7
Marco Polaris
I would make his chin a little more pronounced . . . and for an orc, he seems to lack some muscle - seems more half-orcish to me. Other than that, pretty good.
07-05-2004, 05:01 PM#8
Rai
thats a quite simple drawing
i think the folds are complex and simple at the time, the folds needs working here..
its b&w but...it requires more shading, like the size of his two massive arms should produce shadow somewhere(off topic no?) the second blade ( flame looking ) is too short, usually a sword is 3-handle long, either the handle is long, or the blade too short. the fire sword is awesome by the way! but the other one is boring, but have a good lenght. his face expression is rather original, trying to regain his puberty perhaps. lmao, forget the latter. the two hands have finely drawn fingers, they wrap nicely around the swords' handles.. id suggest a bit more fine details in his ear and shading.