random sketches, concept, and a story board!

some how i always think the title is a waste of something.

makes it feel like im going to repeat the same words here.

tore a ligament or somehting like that on my knee after falling down the same hill. so er yea... ouch.


this one... playing around with eyes, dont say anything about the gun. its out of porportion.


concept of some new contraption that i call the IMP jet. smaller than any other jet, fast, and just think of it as a bunch of bees stinging you. bitches. and the DSA pilot. something for the comic.


another concept for a comic. guess what this fighter is and get a cookie. lol. its a real one so it aint bs.


i also somehow made my own little. maniquin thing after looking at the 2 tutorials, on that fineart site and polykarbon and some how made my own which is much easier for me. yea...



and now the story board. sorry if you cant read it. its a stroy board too so dont expect much out of it.




i just draw these as they come into my head, then put them in order, so i dont forget.

all GIANT RED X'S!!! ITS OUT TO GET ME AHHH

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I feel sorry for your knee... but I think you need to check those links again... I'm not seeing anything.

icbm1987

EDIT: AND STOP QUOTING ME!!!!! ^_^

hmmm...

strange because the attatchment somehow got deleted....

im gonna use shadow's reipway account just to hose the pictures up for now since im having truoble with my ftp.

i could log in but i cant add or delete anything. then my uncle suddenly realizes he forgot to change my status! so more waiting and im gonna have to call him tommarow.

EDIT: how about now?

well, i see them.
the gun, is woah. i tried doing guns, and now i realize how hard they are. but this was done from side, with a different angle it gets harder..
the man in the corner, have its ears too high, its commonly happens when not paying attention. thats..nice doodling.

as for the second page of sketches...the first view of the pilot (small one) shows a large tube, and the larger view (complete view) have a small tight tube attached to the box on his chest.. it would be hard to move its head to right and left. for the airplane i cant say much about the engine beceause i am not an engineer.

and then i scroll. woah, an airplanes with huge lines! how designish! it looks like decent lmao, but its from a plain angle/perspective.

the boobs area on the female looks like a bitch...brute, it looks like her shirt is really really wraped on her, usually shirts lets aloose. i see big boobs, maybe try folds here. she holds guns from a different angle, they're as sexier as in the first pic. woah, thats stunning!

fox...i never really liked him, a humanoid fox with hairs are weird ideas from me, i try to avoid him on the forums. the concept dont affect the quality of the drawing, its still very nicely drawn.

and now, lmao, for your storyboard, we can't expect more than the classical american action movie; much guns, senseless violence, coarse languague. it was too blurry and impossible to read/see at some places. i guess that, only you have the power to see this forgotten nerubian languague.
i made a quick sketch of your storyboard, plz dont be offensed, its a joek ;) all my hard critics and comments are well worth it!

lol, thanks rai.

about the pilot, undead don't need to see alot of things in order to fight.

huge lines?

im also trying attatchments again hoping that it wont get deleted again!

I CAN SEE!!!!

I'm glad that you've found a manakin frame that suits you.

The DSA pilot is cool... but the IMP jet won't be able to VTOL with that engine placement.

it needs more engines in front to balance out the lift.



Troll's back.

icbm1987

Always a pleasure to see your drawings, you are very good at army stuff, no doubt you could be a good comic maker, as for critic, i think the other covered the essential, i got nothing to add

have you even seen his comics?

http://www.deathswebcrap.tk

funny as hell but hard to read

and 1 of the comic storyboards is blurry

i really like the random stick figures you add

looks good. The jet, i would guess is a f-22 Raptor.

Give me my cookie

good overall

Cool F-22. (hey, aren't they going to start putting F-22s into service next year?)

i really dont get how they name the airplanes

you have a random letter, then some random numbers

im not sure about putting them in service but yea.

there's the YF-22 which is the prototype.

you mean mass production?

hmmmmm.... another wave and this would probably be the last.

i fixed the IMP jet so it can VTOL

also i drew some other jets that got modified. originally the US modified them and they were the F-22's predecessors. the last one is somethign that i made up.


and then here's another one where you'd have to guess what plane it is. it isn't that well known so i'll give you a clue. its number is between the tomcat and the fighting falcon.


and then sandro with out the mask, and the other one is with the respirator.

It's nice to see that you fixed the imp, but it's lost that "I'm fast and annoying like a gnat" feel.

You have a real good feel for the implements of war, and that F-4 kicks.

Sandro is of good quality, but I am extremely happy to see some good feet on him. Now THOSE look more natural and cool. They make me want to see Sandro in Formal attire.

So... something between the F-14 and the F-15... gaaah... no idea.

Keep drawing man... I like the improvements on the anatomy, and I hope your leg is getting better.

icbm1987