Nature

A drawing im still working on. This drawing was another experimantation of mine and it was one I truly enjoyed. C&C welcome.

PS: Done in photoshop and mouse.

Probably the best of your work that i have ever seen. Good job

aye, i looks like a blur between reality and fantasy - half the populus of america are blurred between... so... ya.....

i like it alot

Nice stuff. I have to agree with what was suggested about the waves to suggest perspective.

The colors are too saturated, I must say. That sort of blue isn't often seen in nature. Desaturate the picture a little bit, and maybe turn the hue slightly toards teal. See if you don't like that better. The moon could perhaps be more saturated, but I think it is a matter of preference, as it is achieving a nice cold atmosphere. But that blue is unnatural. Also, the clouds could be a different color, as wter rarely reflects the exact same color back.

Other than that, I really like the mood this picture evokes.

Keep it up.

Thanks for the comments. Alright, I tried to take into consideration all the comments, and hopefuly this will improve the piece by a bit. Tell me if I missed any of your comments.

much better! Good job

Ill prolly end up using the black spot just for a bit more water.

It looks like an improvement. If you could manage it, the area at the bottom of the page woul look really good if a surf was rolling on to the beach.

I see you adjusted the colors, and to good effect. I still think that the water should be somewhat darker than the sky to further differentiate the two materials. I see now that the horizon line is above the center of the page -- good show. Nothing to stagnate a scenery piece like a big flat line running down the center.

I'd be interested in seeing the finished picture if you have the drive to do so. It's nice to see the evolution.