cinematic : the King's Road village

This cinematic will be used in my upcoming campaign, The King's Road. Note that this is my first cinematic... EVER. alright here's the map. enjoy =)

Here's the first map of my campaign. I've added another short Cinematic. A long cinematic is my next project. Of course comments are always welcome here. =)

Im working on my own ciematic project at the moment and their are a few things i'll suggest to you:
1)Add in a sky, its easy and will make it look a lot better then you can turn it off when the cinematic parts over.
2)Make the dialouge more interesting, when you meet a blood mage on the street you dont just say,"Hello welcome to our village" take into account where these people live, wouldn't they speack with a local accent.
3)Add more doodads, they'll make the village look more real, heres some shots of a village i did.
Otherwise keep going you'll get better and better. It doesnt look very good and thats mainly because the terrain was done in ten minutes but you should get the idea of putting nature doodads.

Oh yeah and switch the camera angles too that makes it look a lot cooler :god_help_us: