MTG Block/set

I found a program that I am not using to make my own Magic The Gathering card set, I have a few cards on the list and I decided to to the art for one of them today and I did. Here is the Card


Here is the un-cropped version.
Here is the original design before I touched up parts. I think most of you will like this one better.

I'll get some face details up later, tell me what ya think. I also noticed the confusion in her name, I'll change that. I may change her abilities too.

Edit: Scroll to bottom to see them.

mtg editor requiring the java script? and the one where you can make your own symbol and stuff... i had that

other than that her nose seems big, and her head seems flat, but the rest is good

Yeah, you are right about the forehead, I'll fix that, though with the nose it's just snarling, is it possible to engage melee and still be hot?

Edit: Fixed the forehead a little bit.

a snarling nose wouldnt be like that, it still looks too big

Fine, how's this? Took about 2 seconds.

dang... i was hopin it would be b to post about the breats lol

no matter, im gonna now say the bridge is too sharp of an angle... thats what was buggin me

and this one is better because it covers the breasts more, unlike the other one where it looks like it lacks nipples

Thanks Wormskull, I'm sure I'll go back through and edit a bunch of things because I know a few flaws that I could fix, you helped point out a couple of these.

Shadow, go up two posts, I fixed the crooked nose.

Okay, this is the final version.... for now at least.

Edit: Keep scrolling...

its not the crooked part dangit! i cant explaing.... ill just leave

problem solved!

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!

*i mysteriously got some caffiene high, tho i had no sodas... nor caffiene*

i think there's something wrong with her right leg... it's twisting in an odd angle...

[edit] nvm i didn't see the portrait didn't include her legs...

Overall is great but the nose... doesnt look human... thats the part im learning to draw at the moment so maybe im a bit hard... i dont know if i could scan the noses page of my book... its would give you a great reference for types of nose

I'm going to wait to see what Ogre says before I make any drastic changes to her nose.
Anyhow, here's the next completed card.

about the nose, think its like too oval, er

circular. i know you're going for a snarling dealie but its too circular.

i hope this helps,

at first the nose doesn't look human, rather more like a baboon's. no offense.

hope this helps by pointing out the mistakes and how to fix them.

Okay, that'll work, thanks Death. I'm still going to try to keep some of that snarling look though.

There, now she still has flared up nostrils but her nose isn't hooked. She looks kinda like a lion too, that's cool.

You showed your cards, but what about the program? I felt a little interested for it.



About the first drawing, it doesn't look like she is a woman. Actually, she looks like a man dressed like a woman. She needs desperate fix at the body and face. Her legs look nothing more than a man's leg.

The second one is neat, nothing really wrong with it.