My First Skin, Chaos Footman.

Ok, first some background, and some storyline. I recently started a For the King map (multiple style gameplay- RpG base). A short ways into developing the map, I thought. People on B.Net no longer appreciate a TRUE RpG. They like open RpGs, that says it all. I have recently became a member of this forum (that sounds grammerically outta whack, but idk). I have seen campaigns in progress, and a few good finished ones. So I said to myself "Meh, what the heck. Go for it!" I am now creating a campaign based on the original storyline idea for my 'For the King' map (I will release information on it when I am sure about details). "Ok so where does this skin go in all this mess?" He is not only my first skin ever (I made an Arthas skin with red hair, just to see if I could get through the entire process without glitches... And did). This 'Chaos Footman' will fit in my campaign as there will be and enemy hero (not specifing at this time) that can turn your Footmen into Chaos Footmen, making them hostile to all (including the enemy hero). This is the skin that I plan to use for the Chaos Footmen.

Please be constructive with your feedback, if you wish only to critize and not to make suggestions on what should be changed, than do so specifically, and I'll change it to something else.

Thank you for your time, I can't wait to hear your responses.

-MadBagOfHorses

Edit: The red around his shoulder pads are supposed to be runes. They didn't turn out well because the space I made them in was pretty small :(. Tell me if you like...

Here's some WC3 Viewer screenies:

Great skin and all , but the blood on the sword and the runes on the shoulder aren't that good and I would also darken the shoulder pad armor to be like the helmet and etc.

Also next time put your completed skins in theSkin Gallery

Very sorry... Thanks for the advice, I'm thinking about taking the runes around the shoulders off (it was a tight spot to try to fit some). I was also thinking about making some more sunk in runes (like on the helmet if you can see it good enough). The sword isn't supposed to have blood on it. The original version of this (played with this skin for about 3 1/2 hours today) had red cracks all over him (and more skin was showing) and I was thinking it was something like, the chaos radiating from him. I tried to make it look like his sword had the same cracks, but as you said, it came out bad :(.

Thanks for the criticism, and from now on, you'll only see my skins in the skin gallery... Heh, sorry :\ .

-MadBagOfHorses