The two twins

Hello all, i just thought of a cool story, and here it is:
The Two Twins
In an ordenery elven family, were two ardenary twins, they were just ordenary kids ^_^ . One of them (Medhis) wanted to become a grate warrior, but the othe one (Arthanis) wanted to be a cool mage. And when they were, ordenary, playing, one of them (Arthanis) ran in to the forest, and there found some kind of a misticle crystal, some strange power knowcked out the kid. When he woke up, he didn't see any crystals and thought that he just amagenned it. But when they became older Medhis was a good warrior and Arthanis was also not bad but all the time Arthanis did a spell he felt a lot of anger and evil in him. And one night Medhis and thair parants heard Arthanis screaming, when they came to see what's going on, he was gone...

And the rest you will see in my map.
I'm planing to make it a map with some cool cinimatic sceans. And now pleas tell me, what do you think. :god_help_us:

Oh and the screenies will be soon, when i will get some free time. (and btw, thx to Ice Knight, hes elf blademaster gave me the idea )

Oh come on, doesn't anyone wants to say anthing?

It'll most likely suck horribly, mainly because your English seems quite... lacking. My suggestion is to either get someone who can spell to help you, or give up.

I know about the english, but what about my story?

The story seems interesting but it depends on you you approach it..., still seem cool, I'll look into it

Thx again :D
Well this is only a 20% of ALL the story, i don't want to tell it to you now, so that it would be interesting to play. It will be a mistereous game ^_^