My first landscape!

08-17-2004, 11:33 PM

Well, I'm new here and i wanted to show you guys what I really worked on for the past hour! This is my first hard-worked drawing i did since i was 8 or 9. Anyways, plz dont be to harsh and obviously its not done :D! This is also my FIRST landscape (i only drew Kirby :o ). Plz tell me wat you think!

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08-17-2004, 11:39 PM	#2
Aznwhore	hmm, perspective needs a little changing, nerub tower shoulda been pointing more upward rather than faceforward cause your spike maze is pointingup as well try and get the tower from the left side

08-17-2004, 11:40 PM	#3
Marco Polaris	Interesting . . . I'd add a little more shading to that tunnel area, if it is one.

08-18-2004, 01:50 PM	#4
Saboera	defenetly interesting, i dont have any other critics to add, we see you actually took time and effort, it turned out pretty good btw welcome

08-18-2004, 02:34 PM

Retarded

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Originally Posted by Aznwhore

hmm, perspective needs a little changing, nerub tower shoulda been pointing more upward rather than faceforward cause your spike maze is pointingup as well
try and get the tower from the left side

ooo i'll get on to that!

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Originally Posted by Marco Polaris

Interesting . . . I'd add a little more shading to that tunnel area, if it is one.

Dunno, I only had a mechanical pencil and i am not a very good artist to do such things yet.... Different shading levels with a mechanical....... eh.........

and thnx carebear

08-18-2004, 03:16 PM	#6
Muoteck	Believe me, different shading levels with mecha pencil are possible and not so hard ;)

08-18-2004, 03:45 PM	#7
Aznwhore	i'm usually only armed w/ a mech pencil myself, just use your thumb or something to smudge out the shading, hehe