Freehand Proudmoore skin

I made this really quickly cause I was bored, but then I figured I could improve it.. Unfortunately I ran out of ideas so please help me.. crits\comments?

well thats sure something you got there. really cool for freehand. not much to say actually, except those socks/shin armor is oh so fly... very cool. but you might wanna work on the muscles...linear: theyre fine, but they need shading.

gj!

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Cool skin, but his expression appears that he is scared shitless, yes, shade his armys more, and more definition on the face, lighter areas, darker around eyes to bring them out etc. I basically only see 2 skin colors on the face, also i really don't like that skin tone, make it lighter, he resembles a zombie atm.

Thx guys, yeah I don´t know why I didn´t notice that the muscles(?) wasn´t shaded at all.. and I´ll change the skin tone and try to fix the face a little bit..

Very nice man. The shin armor is insanely nice, and I dont know what the arms are, hairy or shredded clothes. Anyways the face does look like he's scared so do something bout that. Anyways good job!

Small Update. New face, new arm and new skin tone..

Good, now he doesn't look scared, but the arms still need work, and its lighting, not lightning.

wow... the freehand makes him look so cel-shaded like that game viewtiful joe or something...
hehe, freehand is certainly an interesting style of skinning

I don´t know, is the arms any better?? I really suck at shading muscles:god_help_us:

Yes, arms are much better now, the belt is really lame, give it some type of buckle and some shading or something, right now its just like a black line.

Like the skin. However I noticed on the neck you have those three stichings, and the skin underneath it isnt shaded. Just pointing that out, not very noticeable. Nice skin and I would like to see it in a map on BNET soon!

Yeah I know the belt suck, but I didn´t know what to do so that´s why it looks that way, but I´ll fiddle(is it a word?) around a bit and see if I can find a good solution.. About the neck thing, its the wrapping,, don´t know what to do about it really.. but I´ll try to fiddle(there it is again) around with that too.. tomorrow, I´m going to get some sleep now, thx alot for the feedback guys! Keep it up. //Fredalf



EDIT: Oh and by the way, I don´t think that this will be in any map.. unless someone asks for it that is^_^ -over and out-

Sorry for double post but, here´s a small update... just changed the belt.(damn it´s hard to do anything with that belt..!!)...will shade it better if you like it :god_help_us:

looks better than the normal one thats sure cool

Oooh. I like it. The belt buckle is better than before. The gloves look a bit (itsy bit!) funny. IMO, it's too bright... Could be a bit darker. (am i the only one who is bugged by it?) Well anyways, apart from those, thats really cool skin.