T666-your terraining agony uncle.

ok i dont know whether this will grow or not..but in recieving varios ss off rienless and giving simple advice such as creating examples and telling him where he needs to improve the shot i cam up with doing this on a larger scale....bieng an experienced terrainer i can hlp you with your terrain, jus attach a ss then ill asses it, give advice and post an example, whether its finished or in WIP jus submit it.

where did u get that tree?? ^_^ the brown big one i mean

looks like a world tree with a big bush on top, ither that or the tree from the tree pack

world tree and a custom tree on top.

Cool, but can you put up those models here please if you can, excluding the elveswood, terrains really cool btw

Heh your welcome for that tree idea devil. Anyway, my suggestion to you guy's is instead of asking for new doodads try something new. Stackingtree'sontop of eachother can get you cool effects (that how i got the worldtree base with custom top) See The Archon Cinematic for other great ideas.

But new doodads are teh pwittyfol

hu?? w/e, anyways nice new model, nice idea toxicseaweed, actually i did that b4, but with abre trees, i also used abres to make branches on the world trees, youll find it works well

erm what does that mean, ive been doing this for a long time, with no influence...cant remember you or anyone giving me the idea..

this thread was meant for ppl who need to improve there terrain by submitting ss...guess they like to make new threads and clog the forums..

perhaps this will reduce the number of single shot threads, as well as offering good advice. im going to sticky this for now and see if it works out

Made this little island awhile ago, figured I'd post it on here for advice etc. Didn't spend about more than 2 days on it so its not perfect or anything.

If anything I should have been the creator of this thread considering my reputation in the art gallery.

1st Shot: Too many rays of light, not much you can do about that though unless you create small regions of rays of light. The water seems to be floating. You can see a selection circle. You can see the blackbackground on the right.

2nd: Again water is floating, The cliffs don't look like they fit, mostly because their Blizzard's crappy cliffs and because this is a tiny island in the middle of the ocean. Still too many rays of light

3rd: The bushes there don't look right, the one in the middle does but the two on the side just stick right out too much, too much contrast, pixelated and coming out of the sand. The background looks a bit weird, the waterfall or fountain of health or w/e it is. Again Blizzard's crappy cliffs bring it down.

4th: Shrubs a bit pixelated but not much of a shot compared to the others.

Most of the stuff up there you can't change like Blizzard's cliffs or pixelated textures but it's just a few suggestions.

if anything, these kinds of one man critic threads are bound to get overlooked. it's easier and better if you just make your own thread and get crits from a variety of ppl rather than from just one person. also, IF these threads ever get to the point where there's lots of ppl and and lots of images, there's gonna be images that are overlooked, and then people will think that they're being ignored.

so i think i'll unsticky this. if other ppl think its a good idea, they'll start posting in it more, and bring it back up, and then i'll consider stickying it again.

your intentions were good, but i still think that individual threads would help improve ppls terrain more.

hey terrainer-666 could u tell me what u think about this pic i made


btw please go easy on my coz this isnt very good but i think it might be my best work yet and i have only been terraining for alittle while