New Rpg Map, Help needed. Revised

I am sorry for not detailing and looking like a newb. but in a way i am i dont know how to modle and skin but i know how to import and trigger alot of things im good a placing doodads. Anyways back to my maps info.

Storyline- You start the game with a cinimatic, first a few scenes of the starting castle, then a scene saying as it fades out This is where our story begins, The next scene shows the king of Arachon and displays a series of scenes while having the king tell his guards to seal off the castle from attacks. and the guards leave and close the gates to the castle, then the screen fades out and says now we meet our heros(or something beter than that), and a dialog pops up with the classes: Archer, Swordsman, Mage, Thief, Priest. Then it fades in with the two heros talking about having to find away out of the castle. and they have a split in the cinimatic where u you can talk to the villagers and buy stuff with starting gold and gold u get from mini games, also u can talk to the king that will be a cinimatic and also u can talk to a few displaced pesants for hints to the certain exit. then when u find the exit (its a cave) when u get close to it it will start a cinimatic. with you and the second hero who ever it is, and they say stuff like god this was hard to find and then they enter the cave and shows them in the cave and player1's hero saying Geez what did we get our selves into, Player2's hero says what do you mean, Player1 "now we have to found our way out of here" cinimatic fades out and you have to find your way ou of the cave fighting goblins and stuff like that. **one special feature to come once maps finished item wise is save & load code** then once you get to the exit of the cave you find a fallen guard at the exit and he gives you a map. you and your partner cant read the map because its in elvish and your friend says that he has a friend in a town near by who can read it. so you travel to this town fighing critters along the way and when you reach the city you meet the next heros screen fades out and dialogs pop up for rest of players (3,4,5) then camera fades in and you find you and player2 are talking to his friend that can read elvish and he tells you that the map leads to the five hidden treasures of arachon hidden away from evil for 100 centuries and that they were made for five special people that will eventually come to save them from evil. then you find out that only one person can carry a stone if you have two of them you will die of the power it holds . then they say WAIT we only have three of us. then the friend tell you that e has some friend that would be willing to help and then he brings you to them and then you all meet together and talk about finding the 5 teasures and the tel you they would happliy join you on your journey and before you start the real gamming experience you have to help the people in the city to get some money..... and just to let you knoe thats a great tip to do lol
cause the first stone you have to buy through a series of items. and you have to talk to people for all the hints. oh in the second town and in following towns there will be stables for horses to be healed and stuff like that
Horse details

• You must buy horses
• You must have a saddle to ride the horse
• You must get trained to attack on the horse to be able to attack while on the horse.if not u better run,lol
• Storage of items on the horse
• and being able to store horses in stables.
• and special minigames like horse racing with your horses.

House details

• Storage
• Other things in the house u can interact with.

City details

• Talking to certain Villagers
• minigames
• and more.....(hidden passages, dungeons, hidden trasures,ect)

I will be needing a terrainer, modelest/skinner, hero creater/abilitys/spell maker.

My skills are Placing doodads apropritatly for sceneray cinimatics i am good with um and triggering i love to trigger.
is this good????

Looks just fine, although it's the wrong forum.

EDIT: Has been moved.

Well I don't know about the wrong forum (newb alert *points to self* :)) but I could help with heros and spells. That's my basic specialty :3 I could come up with a few heros, all based from D&D mind you. :)

Annoying... it has a thread like this in a different part of the Team Gathering forum as for one... as the second part, I just merged an other one with it... bah...

I'll fix this when I get home from school -_-