I'll give you two versions of a comment:
1(forum moral code) Its pretty good...you have a theme
2(personal opinion) Its terrible. It has no 'UMPH' the colors make me question my religous beliefs...
Go to the skinning factory thread an LEARN realistic cloth etc, then repost wip.
-Have a ncie day and watch the slicing axe trap beside the door!
-Horus:o