Kill Bill Inspired (need help)

Ive been hooked on Kill Bill lately and made this little drawing, I just need comments on how I can improve in my style and what could use fixing

(dont say it needs shading its just my style)

You have some problems with the elbows... It make that the poses look wierd. You should try to draw with models, it's good for learn this sort of things.
The legs of the guy are too stiff, I think.
And the face of the girl need more work, especially for the eyes.
keep working, until u become a good drawner...

No offense final... but... eugh...

You should pre-sketch stuff before you draw the details.

Like draw a manakin and use circles and elliptical shapes for the joints and chest/hips etc.

Do lots of thumbnails with a manakin until you find a pose that you like.

icbm1987

Yeah you got a point

Kill Bill is a great movie, if you can capture the style in the movie, you've done alot.

First off, you need work on your overrall drawing skillz: proportions, hands and poses.
The characters seem too stiff her face too, needs more emotion since its hard to decipher in this case.
Well keep practicing. ^^b

And drawing kill bill stuff is definitely cool!