Need your opinon, One of my first skin.

Im new at skinning and this is one of my first skin, I like my skin and i think its good skinned as a newbie skinner. So i need your opinion, and say if there is anything i could do better. If u can't see what he has on his head shall it look like a black cap, if you look at a Orc Warlord he has one of them to. :god_help_us:

Ok.
First of all, his teeth.......
Ahh! ok.. they are WAY to far apart... i really dont sugest giving people teeth, just make lips over them, much neater and cleaner.

Second...
Regardless of the orc warlord, the cap Dosent fit on the Deamon hunter.

Third...
What is it.. i really can tell what it is.... is It some kind of Flesh deamon?

Fourth...
For a first skin, you should have probobally just gone for one color pants.
The airbrush is a bit too.... err...hmm.. ok, i just dont think ive ever seen pants like that (I mean that its probbally not a great design to put on pants)

fith...
You should make better use of hair.
Look at the Techniqe factory here for some great hair effects.

Ok. So now that ive gotten that out of the way, its not such a bad skin.
Really, you are congratulated for making a skin at all. This isnt that bad reall.

Ok... i really like those blades.......
Thats my definate faviroute thing about this skin. those blades are COOL!

I must say that the skin isnt to bad either....

Basicaly, you have flaws. This isnt anything new. You are a new skinner and need pracice, everyone does. This is a very good base to start off with, congratulations! What you need to doo is look through techniqes, get to know how skins are put together and soon youll be skinning with the best!

Congrats,
-Garith

(P.S. sorry if i sounded to hard up there)

Thanks for the reply :8 I have used the techniq factory and its very helpfull to me. I tried to make so the body look like flesh but it hard for me to make it, its just look so easy in the techniq factory.
And i no idea of that it is, yeah you could call it flesh deamon maybe.
The weapon i really like it self but, its just a recoller, not the round thing but, the blade is.

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i like it all but the what you did with the circle thingy... maybe you could make that like flesh or something

Well, it's not bad, i only dont like the teeth, they don't sute him.
And i see that it is a good skin but just strached on the model, making is not so good.

Future skins belong in the Completed/WIP/Textures forum...

im really gettin sick of repeating myself when WILL YOU NOOBS LEARN??? sorry for that its just annoying...

nice skin, but get rid of the teeth. it looks weird if he talks,.