plz give me feedback!

I am working on a map in my campaign and I am a little noobie on the terrain point. So I thought I could post some screens and you guys could tell me if something should be changed or added. :) Plz only constructive comments no stuff like: "OmG j00 sux I = G0sU!" :D
No but seriously I just want some tips so I can learn more advanced stuff in the editor.
Thanks inadvance :)

You are exactly in the same situation that me,well now that it isn´t the important, well i think you are a good terrainer,but in the screen of the right (if you got 1024x768,cause thats my resolution) out the vilage it was absolutly nothing,and i hope you fix that,then you could add more doadods,some fences,passive creeps,etc.Well here is my opinion i hope i helped you ^_^

Thx for the tips/comments, I will add doodads that thing's for sure :). As for the creeps; it's not supposed to be any creeps at the locations of my screens... It's just the first mission if my campaign so there isn't much action just a introduction to the rest of the campaign. But I will add some orcs and stuff when another forest is done in the middle of the map :)
I didn't really understand the thing about the screen... :p


As I said before in the answer to drcclerigo; I will add more doodads. But the tips about the city are very good... I didn't think about it until now. thank you! ^_^

To the thing of the screen i was ment to the picture (to the picture of the right,and he is only in right in the resolution i mentioned)well i hope i aswered you DoktorRoFL

I have another screen from the map that I forgot in the first post...
It is a screen of a bridge over some water(duh!). It is very boring but I don't know what to put there to make it look better. :(

pretty good i guess

Not bad at all,it´s good

Ok thx then I will stick with that. :)

You Know i think (to be new in this,well like me!) you are a pretty good terrainer,if you got a messenger,contact-me,cause i have in mind do a campaing whit one of my friends,and none of us are good in terrain,and like i can see you are good!Well i hope you got the messenger :P

Hey DoktorROFL if you need some help with your terrain like if you need someone to do it, I would be glad to help. If you do I'll will try and look in this thread once per day.

Well, thx! I do have MSN messenger and my e-mail is: [email protected]. But I am not so sure if I am the right person to ask to do terrain... It's not that I don't want to but I am not sure I am good enough to do terrain to such a serious project (as I think it is ^_^ ) Have you asked anyone else to do it for you? IronI3lade seems very anxious(sp?) to do terrain ^_^ .
But if you really want ME to do it for you so hey, why not :)
You can add me at msn if you want.

That sounds like a very good idea :)
But I don't really need any help right now but maybe later when the terrain becomes more complicated...
But this map I am doing is just one map in a whole campaign and I wont put it on battle.net, I will just show it for my friends and let them play it...
So the only "credit" you might get is reputation on this forum by me.
I think we will talk some more in the future... :)
cya!

Not bad as a beginer. In the forest can you set mushrooms nearby some tres it don't look bad.
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Current Projects:
-NFS/GT Mod

ok just tell me when you need some help.