Well i've basicaly just done the carapace, and the thing is i want to have some suggestions on how to improve it. And no i dont want to be flamed if i wanted that i'd be playing diablo.
Heres the story:
"One night Van Helsing got a clue to where a vampire was or at elast that was what the people told him, Van Helsing decided whether he would go to the Castle where it was rumored to be a vampire and no normal vampire a very powerful one. It is said the vampire was experimenting with demonic energies, and how to fuse metal on to the body of a sentient being. Van Helsing decided to go to the castle, since the werewolf he's been chasing was long gone from where he was. When Val Helsing was about to knock on the door a little misshapen man opened the door and said with a low discant voice "Welcome, Van Helsing my master has been expecting you"
Van Helsing pushed the little man aside and walked into the great hall. Van Helsing was astounded by the look of all the ancient works in the hall, everything from a 1000 year old pictures to a great statue of a red material which looked like a giant knight in shining red armor. ..to be continued
i'll finish it later
EDit: Done | 
