Island terrain!!!

10-04-2004, 11:57 PM	#1
Metal_Sonic64	Ok, i've done some terrain (my first actual terrain ^_^ ) Anyways, i'd like some feedback on it plzzzz. Tell what to improve or if theres too many doodads etc. All I want is some feedback !

10-05-2004, 04:38 AM	#2
player_72985	This is pretty nice for your first island terrain. I love the fog and the destroyed ship in the distance. altho the island is just a bit too round, I would try smoothing things out so the island is longer & not too round. but still very nice ^_^

10-05-2004, 04:45 AM	#3
Murcielago)	perty sweet...like player_72985 said, smoth it out a lil more like the idea you have going , oh and next time could you piz post in jpg form, we have to think about the 56k ppl ^_^ .......damn i sound like a mod :P -Murcielago)

10-05-2004, 08:16 AM

Gitlich

if i am correct in assumeing its set at night, then id suggest a darker fog, (perhaps something around the lines of R:30 G:30 B:70). it looks good so far, no real flaws to speak of. the only thing id say is expand and make more, perhaps try a bigger island close to it with the same principles. perhaps more vegitation around the trees, but i cant really see them well enough to make a judgment.
very nice work

10-05-2004, 10:02 PM	#5
Metal_Sonic64	Update srry bout the screenies, all i hav is paint and i guess my options are a bit limited I set the fog to a darker tint and reduced the density, i like the effect it gives for the background ;) Kinda like a storm. nways, plz reply! I'm workin on number 3, expect it soon Edit: jpeg screens are on the way!

10-05-2004, 10:33 PM	#6
Metal_Sonic64	Crescent isle!

10-06-2004, 01:21 AM	#7
Falitian	Not bad, but in the latest screen you seem to have left out trees in the distance. If your going to have them in some places then you need them everywhere, But the terrain is awsome. Although you might want to have some sort of towering tropical mountain or somehting in the distance because it seems to flat and boring, theres no central purpose of the isle.

10-06-2004, 06:14 AM	#8
PheoniX_VII	Some nice sceenshoots, you show some potential here. The overall looks good but I just keep on buggin myself on that giant archway on that island.. is close to as big as the island itself. I would remove it or perhaps just reduce its size a little but still, Its your map :)

10-06-2004, 09:55 AM	#9
reinless	erm... you might want to size down the cattail just a bit. it's almost as big as a tree

10-15-2004, 11:22 AM	#10
Undead_Arthas	I think its great. I like making lakes and stuff in sunken ruins.