Captain Death (WIP)

My new WIP... feel free to give comments/crits.. as long as it´s constructive. Can´t improve if I don´t know what´s wrong, right?

thats cool. love those cuts in his face, think the mustache look wierd, i dunno what it is but there is something bout it.

Ok changed the mustache and a few other very minor changes... please, comments people! 30 wiews and 1 reply!

well i think that the face cant get any better. now you have to start working on the body.

The face looks strangely familar. Your style is very cartoony I'm not sure if your going for this. Try to get rid of all those dark lines. Use some more highlights to bring the skin out more. The hair is good but would look a lot better as black hair so it will contrast well. Very nice start but try to get rid of dark lines when making details. Perfect that and you will get a lot better.

Actually i did that on purpose, I couldn´t decide if i was going for the cartoony or the not-so-cartoony look.. but maybe I should try the not-so...

Any suggestions for the body? (I´m all out of ideas right now..)

Update! black hair, added armor + general touching up.. feedback?

The face is awesome. The body is awfully blurry... Maybe make a ripped tunic and under it chainmail that has broken at some parts and the rotten flesh shows under it and has some cuts in it like on the face. Rusty iron shoulderpads would look cool, no? The cap'n is undead, right? Add the wound that killed him somewhere.

Dunno. Just giving ideas.

Thanks alot for the ideas! Like the ripped tunic/chainmail.. I´ll try that one=D

Sorry for dp.. Anyway, another update: changed the armor to ripped tunic with chainmail. The chainmail isn´t the best, I´ve never done one before.. I´m aware that the face is detailed and the body is not.. any suggestions on how to fix that? Other suggestions, crits/comments?

EDIT: Update.. All done exept the belt.. suggestions?