Magician girl

This one differs quite a lot from the other ones I've done lately, but I felt like doing something in pencil and then practicing inkin in PS :)

Here's the pencil sketch, which doesn't have clothing yet (I added clothing in PS), but it has no details around those areas so no worries :) Pencil

Here's the full size one if someone wants to color it or just look at it :PFull Size

That's a pretty good drawing, and it looks easy enough to color.

I'd suggest trying to get straighter lines, like in the legs and stuff. Otherwise, great.

Thanks. I made the legs a bit better as you suggested :) also added more detail to feet. Hope it's better :)

Full version here

It's good. yeah, good job.
but I think you should add a little shading. actually the pic looks a bit... vacuum.

Thanks stormrage :)

I'm shading it as I color it. I just posted the lineart incase someone wants to try their hand at coloring it too :)

I've colored it now :)



*edit* moved pictures to a lower post.

her eyes isn't they a bit of??
and her head looks to round to me
:)

hmm, now that you mention it, it does look a bit round, but that would be a bit harder to fix at this state, and I think the left eye may be just a little bit too low. I moved it up a bit, a very little bit :P


Edit - Moved pics to a lower post.

My only real problem with the thing is that the head seems to be at a different angle than the face.

looks like the head got snapped..
you should try to draw some hair around the face so it doesnt look round

She's got two left feet...

but otherwise... it looks alright...

Oops :o You're right. I knew there was something wrong with the feet.


Marco: I can see what you mean :P I'm having some problems getting it right, if anyone could lend a hand with it, I'd be happy. It's supposed to be looking up :)


Edit - Feet fixed :P Made them a bit more detailed too.


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Edit 2 - Made some wallpapers for own use mainly but might as well put em here.

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I've done some fixing now :P The feet are fixed and so is the right hand which looked like it was going to snap. Also made the belly a bit smaller.

I was rather happy with this one since I haven't done anything like this for a while and I liked how it turned out so I made a few wallpapers too :P

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Wallpaper

Edit - A rather rough fix on the head :P I Think it looks better now.

Now I'm done with it unless someone points out something big :)

Okay, I said I was done with this, but I decided to remake the head afterall :P



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Wallpaper

Hope it looks a bit better now :) I also hope you will forgive me for making a double post. :P

Much better, good job.

I know you're done and everything, but it looks like her arms are going behind her.