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Ashenvale waterfall scene

10-16-2004, 06:30 PM#1
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As that usefull icon already said , feedback wanted ^^

The first is without fog , lighting , ...
And the second is game view settings

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10-17-2004, 12:59 AM#2
Falitian
damn, that looks pretty good. Sorry it took so long for anybody to respond.
Try scaling up the trees to a reasonable size, because ashenvale is a forest, and trees are big. Go into a forest and you'll see trees about 50 time taller than yourself. But having some smaller ones near the shore looks cool too. The watewr seems a little shallow everywhere too. You should lower the water level near the middle because with a waterfall that big it should be deeper than that.
10-17-2004, 01:14 AM#3
Metal_Sonic64
Quite nice, i suggest some differeent tree models, some river rush doodads maybe for the riverside, maybe some small trees on the cliff, and a natural bridge would look better i think (the bridge doodad, not cliff bridge) a few more flowers maybe, and some logs or somethin in the water.
Hope that helps
10-17-2004, 01:32 AM#4
Falitian
ahh, dude I just had an awsome Idea. make a doodad of the frog model and then put some lilly pads and those pink cattail things in an area and then put the frogs ojn the lilly pads.

*Goes to make a map just so he can see how stupid his idea will turn out*
10-17-2004, 05:12 AM#5
Murcielago)
heh nice idea frog on lili pads...., anyways gj so far, scale the trees bigger maybe make the center deeper cuz it looks like you could walk across, some shrubs are good too, maybe a holow stump in there somewere. maybe some dark green vines would be nice too

-Murcielago)
10-17-2004, 05:24 AM#6
Sheep(Wolf2)
I think maybe you put a little too many cattails to the right of the waterfall as well as too many shrubs to the left of it. You could add more different colors other than the green, yellow, and brown like maybe fall colored trees. Adding critters like stags would be nice too.
10-17-2004, 09:34 AM#7
Guest
Thanks for all the helpfull tips and ideas.
I will follow them all , and I will also show you a piece of the path to the waterfall so you can give feedback about that as well.

Note about the critters : there are critters around there , but my UMSWE glitched and made them black cubes o_O so I deleted them for now. Normally there were 2 frogs , 1 stag and 1 racoon near the water . There are birds flying around but I don't think they are visible in the screenshot
10-17-2004, 10:24 AM#8
Guest
All right , changes :

- got rid of some shrub on the left
- got rid of some cattail on the right
- trees are bigger , some others trees added
- water is deeper
- more flowers on the side and cliffs
- slightly raised the waterfall so it blends in better
- frogs + lily pads + waterlilythings make a very cool frog meeting ^_^ (thanks Falitian ;) )
- traded the stone bridge for a natural dirt bridge
- added a log with shrub in the water
- added critters (2 frogs on the shore , 2 in the water , 2 stags on the right and 1 racoon on the left , the frog and the racoon that are on the left shore are not visible in the pic)
- added Shandris so you can compare sizes

Again , editor and game view settings
Extra note : in the second pic , you can see the birds flying right in front of the waterfall

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10-17-2004, 12:23 PM#9
Metal_Sonic64
lookin good Maybe a few more enviromental (did i spell it right) doodads near the bridge, not too man y though, maybe a bit of shallow water mixed in with the deep, just like 1 patch around the side, some small rocks under the water fall, and some bubbles maybe. Try a grass bridge, the dirt one doesnt really fit. Other then that PERFECTION
10-17-2004, 01:06 PM#10
Guest
I'll get right to it ;)