Bandits camp

Hi!
I am new whit terrain but one day i thinked "i know im not good at terrain,but i could try"well i made a camp of bandits,feedback please,i am new in terrain :god_help_us:
here are some screenshots of my work:hope you like it

Not bad, maybe a rock here and there around the camp, and some flowers going along the trees, use some tile variation and make it less flat. Some hills will make it look alot better Keep it up! :8

Edit: Looking it voer you can use a bit less river rushes. And make the tents doodads instead of using the regular unit model, make a custom doodad and then set model to tent and pathing texture none, that will get rid of the rocks around the tent.

!!waw thx,i thought i was realy poor at terrain,next day maybe i will do an update,and i dont posted all the screens of the terrain,but well i will do it latter ^_^

Well i changed of ideas here are one that i forgot to post:

im assumeing this is playabl terrain.
firstly, it needs more height variation, even in a flat area is need soemthing, so raise and lower a bit, lowering in the middel of the camp is proably a good idea, or it want it flat over all noise them smooth untill it looks smooth enough.
then add some more tile variation. have mostly dirt in the center of the camp. it looks like an area outside of a forst, so use more dirt, and use at least two different dirt tiles, then add some rock in places around the edge of the camp, on parts where the bandits wouldnt be able to pitch their tents, then add more structure to the camp its self, get lots of things like the fence and barrle model, start with a centeral fire, surrounded with tents., perhaps the odd woden table and chairs (found in the dungeon group) things like wyvern cages, flies, and a small pile of skulls or bones somewhre could also look good. once youve got a more structured set up in the middle have the tents dotted around, but in groups. with some kind of paths clealry in betwee them, then have more doodads and plantlife on the edges of the path where there are not tnets. finaly, add the units. then some fog and weather, id suggest setting it at night for the best effect with a bandit camp. and perhaps some wather like light rain.

but this is all only a suggestion, try the general ideas and come up with what you feels best, be it a more odered or more chaotic layout.

almost forgot, id suggest adding some more cliffs to that terrain, perhaps in the distance so they dont interfear with the camp that much. also, there is too much grass, try usring flowers rocks bushes and shrubs as well

Well,tomorrow i will do the update,whit the advices you will giving me,tomorrow i will appear here whit the update,and the screenshoots,and dont forget this is my first terrain
Edit:and yes is a playable map :8

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A rock is allways good to around. Then make some flowers near the trees!
Make a river or something else with water near the camp, cause you should not make river doodas if theres no water.undefined ;)

On the ground will it be great with some other grass types. Like other formes of gras. And its nice to use 2 formes of trees in a treewall. (2 Tree which allmost looks like the same). undefined
But a nice start

(Curse all your bad and fails.) So the Curse_Man bless you insted ;)

Well,i gonna start the update now,i come back of the scholl and now i will do it,wait some 40 minutes and i will post the new screeshots.

Well here you got the screens of the terrain map,again,but this time was done whit your help

(sorry do this i two posts)I added flowers a river,more tents i ded the camp bigger,puted more doadods,joined two typs of trees,etc.
Hope you like it

hmmm, that's good.
the only thing you need is some lower/raise the terain in some places, and some other terrain types, not only grass a little dirt maby, here and there...

!!!!!!!!!!!i totaly forgoted that!!!!Thanks Reapy ;)

hehe, your welcome.

hehe, how i like that name, Reapy ... btw, how did you know that reapy name? or just lucky guess? (it's just that Fladian calls me that ^_^ )

I know Fladian,but thats not why i know that name,i look at other threads too.......thats why i seyd that name;)

ooh, well ok then. And hows the terrain comming?