Tale of a Tinker

Title says it all,feedback please. :god_help_us:

I like the writing. It was good, but the story was kinda lacking in favor. I know it was a short story, but it felt more like a few paragraphs in a serious from a longer story. maybe if it was longer it would have picked up some action, though i did enjoy the end. Kinda funny, but sad for poor little tinker. I would of adding some more writing there. Anyways, you can prove that you can write. I'll give you that. But remember that short storys are suppose to get a point across really fast.

Here something i remeber in school. A ok writer writes long storys, for they can take as long as they need. A good writer writes short stories for they can get something across in a short amount of time. A great writer writes poems, for they can put a whole story into a few words. (sadly, i can't write poems )

You can write really good, but you have to make use of the words faster to get readers to want to read.

I don't know. I'm sure people, and I, would appreciate it if you would post the story in a post, not in an attachement. Not everyone wants to bother to download it - and I'm at work, so I can't read it.