My Dragonball Z small Cinematic

I have made a small cinemate, dedicated to DBZ. It's just a tester, for i will make a bigger one soon.

All please post comments, and i will soon make a bigger one.

Any suggestions for what i can do?

EDIT: I forgot to mention, you have to open the map in the World Editor, then click, TEST, for the map to work.... sorry for the delay in telling you this.

Ok, I've got some screenshots of the small one, but there not that impressive...


I'll post more soon

Hmmm, not too bad, but it could be a lot better.
First of all, fix up the spelling errors (very few, might i add)
Another thing would be some special effects, like when buu appears and when Shenron is summoned. I really liked the part when the dragonballs flew away!
Another thing is terrain, you should add some, it will really spruce it up.
You can still see the demon hunter for a second after he runs away, so add a cliff or something for him to hide behind.
Make it seem like dragonball Z, if they're at the lookout, add some white marble floor and some collumns to improve the scenery.
I think Goku should go Super Saiyan, it would add some special effects like a thunder clap and some other things.
I dont think the people should just appear there, add a scene where there is an open forest scene and then make them revive, with some special effects
Custum models would be nice too, or u could just colour buu pink ^_^
Pretty good for its size, I can whip up some terrain for it if you want

Lol, thanks alot for the suggestions/offers...

i cant model, sorry.... But i can try to add something else.
i can do better then this, but as i said, its just a tester. I'll be making new ones soon, like bigger ones. From the saiyan saga, to the buu saga. This was just a tester.
And sure, if you like, you can edit the terrain to make it look, however you want. and i dont have AIM or MSN, so you'll have to send by email
And thanks for the comment about the DBall flying away, that part is personaly my favourite part :-)

EDIT: I'm going to edit it now... i'll check back every 5 mins or so, to see if you or someone else replied. Thanks!

srry dude i like your sig but i dont really like the cinematic srry

Well, 'cant please everyone!

But, as i said about 4 times, this is a tester, and i will make bigger and better ones, from saiyan - buu sagas... ok? don't worry, i wont be making new topics either, so please, just be patient kablamo, and they'll get better :-)

NO NO NO WAIT!

i just remembered, that i must edit it first, otherwise, you'd have a terrained one, and i'd have the edited one, so i will fix it up, then you can terrain then one i send in k?

well if u r making cinematics for all the sagea then i sugest u have voice actors to coz i hate watching cinematic that go for longer than 5mins with out voice actors

Well, you dont have to watch it.
Ok i'm just fixing a bug in the Test cinematic, and it'll be put on in 10 mins.

dude this is just a sugestion to make it more interesting if there was voice actors

i dont know what you mean by "voice actors"

Ok, i've finished the editing, here and there, and yes i did fix the spelling mistakes :-)

Ok, there's 3 screenshots below to. plus, you can even dl the newly updated 1, just ignore the old 1 :-)

Il try this one out now, it looks a lot better
Expect my comment soon, sorry i didnt reply before this :\
!!! Critical Error! :stolen_emote: Hmm, when i dled it stopped at 99% for a few seconds before it finished..... Hmmm, what could be wrong!

Hmm, dont know. Maybe you're connection went funny at the end of the dl, or maybe its just the file size (very small might i add...)

thanks for replying, and im sry i had to PM you lol

So have you looked? If you have, do you like it? lol!


You: "Yes!"

Me: " GOOD!!"

lol joking


ok what do u think?