| 10-29-2004, 02:21 PM | #1 |
| 10-29-2004, 03:06 PM | #2 |
Well . . . if I come off as too critical, let me know. The head of the orc is fair enough, but the jaw just seems too small for an orc. The stringiness of the beard accents this feeling, I believe, so giving the beard a thicker feel to it might alleviate this problem. The arms, shoulder, and torso are the real damaging factors to this piece - his shoulders seem far too slumped for a fighting stance, his lower arms seem nontexistant, and his abs look more like pecs. The legs and footing are astounding, though - excellent work, the depth feels just right. |
| 10-29-2004, 08:15 PM | #3 |
Simply put: l33t |
| 10-29-2004, 08:26 PM | #4 |
excuse my anti-n00b behavior, but frost fire.....did you even read Marco's post? i mean, its a good concept and all, but it could use a lot more work. its ok in regards to detail, but SRj's just gotta work on proportions of orcs. hope to see some progress in the future. -flames' |
| 10-29-2004, 08:55 PM | #5 |
Yeah, I read it flames, and I agree with him, the proportions of the shoulders and muscles aren't quite right, but I still think it's really nice. |
