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Ok guys, I need you to crit my skin, crit it to the every detail, make me want to punch you in the face for such little changes (or large). This is my Skin of Undead Goblin Sappers.

Front View

Back View

uh.. the ropes could be chains i guess... more undeadish... do something with the faces, make then boney or something. add a skull (or make it into one) to the helmet of the little goblin... do something with the barrels too... they look the same.

well...i tried

Well to be trully honest, to me they just look especailly tan and not particularly undead. The back veiw looks almost exactly the same as the original. You should change the barrels so they look old and falling apart and dirty. Also maybe a little exposed skeletal features on the goblins would look nice.

right now the skin is kind of pointless... you can acchief the same effect by fiddling with colors in WE xD

do what they said!

You could maybe make the thing on the back a head, but that might not look right. The back picture looks like it was taken at night, can't see much. Also, doesn't look very undead, try giving it a more blue tint to the skin, like arthas.

They still look like goblins....maybe make them looks more like an undead ghoul. And add some blood, runes etc. Good start though

You got critique in the skinning challenge thread. We all said it wasn't undead.
There was advice. Why repost?
They don't look very ressurected from the grave..jus gravely ill with stomach flu.
Show bone
Show rust
Show blood
Guts Gore
Show pale skin.
Show popped viens
Basiclaly show somehting easily alluding to undead units.
-Horus (Turning cynical and harsh)

welll i i wouldnt say thats entirely true... before you continue, you need to detremain what kind of undead you want to have? theres three defind kinds, i think, and thats:

resurrected or reconstructed, basically a dead body come to live, these fellas really look like walking corpses, being either entirely skeletile or meatblobs, abomination is the perfect example for this.

then you have the corrupted kind of undead, thats either resurrected immideatly after death (sylvanas) preserving the body in perfect state, or corrupted (like arthas), good examples are darkranger and deathknight.

and then theres the third kind, wich are basically ghosts... thats none of your business for this skin.

looking at the nature of the original unit, i'd say the first option would be the best, as they would have blown themselves to smithereens and where sown back together by someone (something) to just... repeat the proces ^ ^

just take some time to look at ghouls and abominations, see how they look see what theire textures are like, and then start over with 'undeadifying' the sappers.

for the barrels and tnt and stuff, make it rot, and make ropes chains, as been said before.

good luck, you'll need it on this one.