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11-03-2004, 12:02 PM#1
Guest
What can I do better and what is good or bad? Please give me some feedback!

Ps: English is not my native language. o_O
11-03-2004, 12:07 PM#2
KingGigli
All i suggest is that you add more planks, theres to big of a gap between each plank of wood. a short guy could fall through!
11-03-2004, 12:11 PM#3
Gitlich
very nice so far.
however, i think you should make the stairs thicker. they could look odd slightly more cylidrical, but i dont like the effect you get when their so flat and strached.
the use of the peasents graves is very good .

the surounding terrain looks too flat for my likeing, if there was even a slight increase in the river flow, it would flood most of the surounding terrain. perhaps raiseing it all up slightly, so the river looks more realistic, and so you can make the path slghtly lower to give it a more worn effect.

i dont think the background in the top left suits the terrain at all, first thing id change is the sky to the fogged sky, and add a heavyer fog, somehting like a dark teal to compliment the plantlife. also id suggest useing custom trees instead of the normal wc3 ones, as the trunk are just to thin for that pic, the forest should look dencer, there are three azshara trees in the Dl section thast could look very good in this terrain.

i dont like the stark contrast between the mushrooms and the log in the forground, try tinting them darker and see what effect it give (as well as lowing them into the log, so their not partialty floating in the air)

finaly id say use less of the ashenvale vines tile. it rearely looks good, a mix of lump grass, normal grass and grassy dirt looks much better IMO

all in all, very god work, keep it up