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Orc Fortress

11-07-2004, 03:11 AM#1
Mouse.Pad
ok... this is for the gaiscape barren's challenge thing... here's my pics ;)

27 SS




























C&C plz ;)
11-07-2004, 05:18 AM#2
Mivalekan
You make me realize how much I suck at terraining.
11-07-2004, 07:14 AM#3
Blitzkreige
Wow, nice job.

Time for criticism.

You commited a cardinal terrainer sin IMO. You used the WE cliffs.
They blow. Try using the raise/lower tool, or try and disguise it with doodads.


A lot of your map seems just too flat. Try making hills and mounds in the fort.

Well, it looks great but has some major flaws. BTW, I love the little mini-bar.
11-07-2004, 09:07 AM#4
muldav
Great use of the barrens expansion pack. But! you need a lot of doodads to fill out the environment. your cliffs looks a bit boring and you need to use some tile variation too.

but Gj. this is gonna get interesting when all of us submit
11-07-2004, 12:42 PM#5
Mouse.Pad
oh yeah i forgot to add that there are 4 SS in there that are VERY WIP becuz it's a connecting fortress that i'd given up on...
11-07-2004, 01:48 PM#6
Vilkacis
Ya i agree with muldav the fortress looks great, but your cliffs are just plain...boring...add some more doodads, and itll look great!
11-07-2004, 07:12 PM#7
Mouse.Pad
alright wineners here they are... i spent another 30min on these:













enjoy ;)
11-08-2004, 03:33 PM#8
xxxSpikexxx
it's not bad but i really don't like these level cliffs... they are just for guys who are new to terraining in my opinion and don't look quite good.

the first ones where a lot better and i felt like "this is soo damn good i have to beat it" ;) . not as if it hurts my pride if i can't make things other terrainers do, i would just like to mess my terrain with others. ^_^

if i would not be busy with my current cinematic i would acept the challange
11-08-2004, 04:59 PM#9
Guest
Wow...... What a terrain.
I thought once i was good doing some towns and that stuff but now... i'm such a noob... good man !
I don't know what to say its all perfect...

Siggi ;)
11-08-2004, 05:07 PM#10
ThE_RiDdLe
The first ones were better. They're incredible good. Interesting floor construction.
11-08-2004, 07:03 PM#11
Mouse.Pad
well the first ones i designed it before i start to terrain it... the second one i just did what came to my mind =.= ;)
11-08-2004, 09:49 PM#12
KingGigli
well theyre pretty good! one thing i can suggest is improve on the bars, that way i can say this more:

AYE! i remember when me and my orcish brethren drank ale and kodo blood in a place like that!

anyways good job
11-08-2004, 10:49 PM#13
Mouse.Pad
that's the same bar u know ;)
this one is called "Pig Stand" the other one is called "Shaman Tent Plaza's Delight"
11-09-2004, 06:17 AM#14
<?>
man, you have great models, but i can say that in real terraining you are nood
11-10-2004, 12:08 AM#15
Guest
not really. i don't think that mouse.pad is nude (lol) i just htink that he/she has GOOD terraining skills (and a good use of the new doodads)