| 11-14-2004, 08:16 PM | #1 |
| 11-14-2004, 08:49 PM | #2 |
Hmmm. It seems that he´s missing his left shoulder - But its still looking very good :) |
| 11-14-2004, 09:05 PM | #3 |
It was meant to be in side view, like goblin in your ava, just with orc facing your way, wuith beardcovering his arm. Will have o make it better next time =p |
| 11-14-2004, 10:10 PM | #4 |
Muo... it looks weird because you didn't draw his chest muscles... Don't add the beard till after you make the rest of the body... It looks pretty nice so far... but I'd still say it would be much better if you started over. icbm1987 |
| 11-15-2004, 12:51 AM | #5 |
i'd like to see some DEEP shadows on this. and a reddish secondary lightsource would be cool too. Like behind him and to the right of the picture, so that the dark side of his face would be highlighted with red. His head doesn't look round enough right now. More shading is probably needed but no doubt you're gonna do that already. Also, this picture looks like a full on bust, so drawing in the other shoulder would work better. the cropping makes it so that the pose as you described it is not very clear. |
| 11-15-2004, 01:40 PM | #6 |
To be honest, i didnt draw shoulders, just head and ballz on his neck... After scanning i decided to make arms visible. I guess i'll make them better so they wont ruin anything :P |
