| 11-17-2004, 10:02 PM | #2 |
I like the wings, the clothes are OK, I think they look good and the folds aren't that bad, it's just the way the , you should put more work on the hands (hands are one of the weak parts in your drawings usually). And of course she needs a face. It's funny because the face is always the first thing I do in a drawing. Concerning coloring, I'm learning this myself (or at least I want to learn, I haven't really started yet). |
| 11-17-2004, 10:24 PM | #3 |
I'm noticing an abundant lack of a face, I do like the cloths though, only problem is they cover everything what's wrong with u man :P:P:P. There's no such thing as mimicing Jac's style she's some kind of art god. |
| 11-17-2004, 10:37 PM | #4 |
Guest | well I dont know alot about angels but I played a game from atlus called Nocturne maybe dont know the spelling Well it has an angel so good and her eyes tide and close and her clothes are black. try coloring the clothe in black |
| 11-18-2004, 10:30 AM | #5 |
1. hips, or abdomin needs to be wider. her upper chest(not her breasts) is too big. 2. fingers are a bit too skinny, or maybe the hands are too small. 3. shoulders seem a bit detached from the body. its not anatomically correct. 4. her right arm looks to be dislocated????? her forearm is bent backwards.... ill give more crits when u update the face ^_^ |
| 11-18-2004, 06:37 PM | #6 |
I think I'll give up this angel, the clothes are too hard to color... |
| 11-20-2004, 10:26 PM | #7 |
if you are in severe doubt about the face, wrap it in bandages (kinda like the classic picture of justice.... or a demon hunter :P ) the hand on our right isnt that bad, its just the other one that needs some work |
