| 11-21-2004, 10:51 AM | #1 |
Inspired by the weekly terrain for week 22 I decided to make my own house .I know the screenshot is small but I was bored to finish it. The screenshot contains about 75% of the terrain I made for it....so I can't make it bigger. I may continue it later. Tell me what you think of it (yes I know...not many people live like me with a mountain behind the house but that made it just more fun to make it ^_^ . EDIT: I have updated the terrain now and the image is replaced by 2 new ones. |
| 11-21-2004, 11:06 AM | #2 |
Guest | Lol, Voi. That screenshot doesn't really show much of your house. I'm impatient to see more! And good job with the site, Chief. Salutions® |
| 11-21-2004, 12:08 PM | #3 | |
Quote:
|
| 11-21-2004, 03:12 PM | #4 |
Its updated now (read Edit) |
| 11-26-2004, 10:53 PM | #5 |
Im impatient. Give me some feedback please! |
| 11-27-2004, 06:32 AM | #6 |
Ordinary house, flat terrain, very empty image... Make something interesting here! Use your imagination! Put your own bodyguardians near house :) And one more - on top image middling terrain design. Terrain desig - this is how you place grass relatively dirt etc. |
| 11-27-2004, 07:54 AM | #7 |
Um... ...your front lawn is dying. I noticed a lack of doors and half a door in the wall. Backyard is a little empty but maybe thats what it looks like? Also, your house looks really skinny. Like only one bed could fit, wall to wall. Just make it pretty. Everyone likes a pretty home. ^_^ |
| 11-27-2004, 11:49 PM | #8 | ||
Quote:
Flat terrain? Not really...look carefully and you see it's not flat at all. Ordinary house? Maybe the house itself is ordinary but the mountains behind and so is not. on top image middling your terrain design? I guess this could be something important with grass and dirt together but I don't really understand what you mean. Quote:
My front lawn is dying: It's not really a lawn. It's only a flowerbed (which really is dying lol) Backyard is empty: Maybe...I don't really know...but we have very small backyard at least. Skinny house: Well...I might have made it a little too skinny. I tried making it look more like a multi-level house. It really is a house with 4 half levels...yes I mean it. There are 4 levels but every level is only half of the house. It should be higher rather high and narrow but I guess the whole house should increase in size... Btw: the house isn't really white...it is red but there was no red house to choose. About doors: I can't help how doors are placed on the models. But I actually think the had a really good placement. Because they are actually located there...but they are not half....but really? what should I do about it? Make a new skin? |
| 11-28-2004, 06:32 AM | #9 |
Don't worry about the doors too much. Ther's not much that I can think of to do without altering the house too much. ( If this is based after your house ) I'll experiment with creating a door and get back to you later. ^_^ And again, don't worry too much; your house looks great. |
| 11-28-2004, 01:53 PM | #10 |
Well...the high grass on the hill before the mountain don't look good right now in my opinion... Also I have noticed I placed flowers in the stairs at one place (oops!). I think it could be improved but I won't work more with this I guess. But I'd like some feedback anyway so I know what you think and what I should do better next time. |
| 11-28-2004, 06:18 PM | #11 |
Voi, I talking about 1st screen. Terrain here flat, not at all but flat, right? Ordinary house. Relly, you shold make something interesting that can please viewer. About design. Okey. See. Near two benches in front of house there are some flowers and bush between stairs. Left part - dirt, right - grass dirt. This is looks bad, right? 50% of your terrain design needs to be reworked. |
| 12-03-2004, 09:53 PM | #12 |
Im copying my own house so I can't do something which isn't like that in reality! The front page has dirt and the house is what you call ordinary.... |
