wallpaper dealie

i've been playing underground 2 for a bit too long so i got sucked into EA's wallpaper contest for underground 2

i have a bunch of reference pics of the car that im going to use for the wall paper,
http://download.shop4all.com/wilson/.../underground2/

and im wondering whether to put the chick infront of the car or behind the car in black an white (with shading of course).

im going need to use 2 materials from EA so it pertains to underground 2...




(its an '86 corolla)

The car is very nice. The lines are not very clean nor straight Ionno if you wnted that but wateva.
The girl idea is good but the drawing isn't. Hands Hips Legs need work.

As for the layout idea. I'd suggest putting both pics on the right. The car at the bottom and the girl behind it but scale them equally to make the girl as big as the car.

I agree with Candy. The girl needs some hips; no one likes a girl with no curves. Also, that fisted hand just doesn't look right. Stand in front of a mirror and do that pose and see what your hand looks like, and then proceed to draw it; it'll help. And just one last minor thing: her mouth seems really low, like its too close to the chin and not close enough to the nose. Other than that, everything looks pretty good; the car is especially nice, good work with that. Only thing that's bothering me on that is the front wheel. Maybe its just the squiggly lines. . don't know. Oh well, just keep at it. Can't wait to see the final product!

ok..

now do any of you know a tutorial how i can give the car a pearlescent look? and carbon fiber too..

i dont wanna take a texture off a car and just slap it on.

blah!

2nd design :P



that infront of this

Please don't tell me you drew the bottom pic lol.

There's only one problem that jumps out at me. Her face looks to bulky, try and make it more refined, IMO the lips are to big, and this may be a manga only thing but shouldn't the ridge her eye brow sits on come out a little more, making the gap there smaller.

I'll assume your going to clean up the car before you actual colour it and so fourth so I won't comment, the sketchy trait of it is the only problem I can see.

Good luck.

Used a ref? Pretty neat ^^b

Face still needs work but its gotten WAY better. Her left hand is weird though
nice bg.

yep, the generic car and girl picture.

lol

i just realized that i made several mistakes. :P time to get to fixing...

EDIT:

progress on coloring... and fixing it as i go along...



need more smudging on that picture....

and this escalade that i did earlier. im so proud of it...