Rocket Launcher

I want to get some feedback on this, its all freehand. The accessories are alphaed(spelling??) out so I didnt draw them, but besides that its all freehand. Its for my project called backup. 2 new races fighting. anyways here it is

well, it's not bad (at least on the unwrap) but that green beard look bad
And his rocket launcher remineds me of the amarican flag o_O

k after getting some comments on wc3sear.ch with a hint of in them ;-) im redoing it... this thread is now a WIP ^_^

what the hell is that :(

please, ffs, get rif of the candy appeal. why does his 'rocketlauncer' look like its made of sugar??? why in the name of god is his beard green? and, on top of all that, why did you pick such a dominant background... and why are you pictures this blurry? even if i wanted to i wouldnt be able to discover ANYTHING good about this. did you use wc3vieuwer?

i'm sorry, its just that this skin has highly desturbed me and i doubt i'll get sleep tonight.

EDIT: right, just read the thread, you allready realized it didnt look good, thats good... but if youre posting a wip, dont show an ugly unwrap, show a wc3vieuwer shot of it on the model, otherwise its impossible to ever judge.