Tempel of Shadow

This is my 3 terrain map so it's not so good so please tell me how I can make it better.

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Good attempt. The ceiling and entrance look great.
Unfourtunately in the sides there are a few annoying glitches where the arches separate, but i guess that can't be helped. The interior was had a nice decor par the floor, the terrain used for it was boring and didn't go well with the arches.
But overall, it was a good TempLE, especially the roof from above.

Thanks. ^_^

More feedback plz.

Don't double, plz..

Anyways. It's kind of nice. Not anything special, but nice anyways.

It seems too light to me. Maybe hue the arches darker.

Also replace the white marble with black tile or a combo of both white and black.

Add to the atmosphere a little...

Looks great!

There isn't ment to be anything special about it. I want u guys to tell me how I can make it better so I can improve my terrain skills. So if that all u have to say u are wasting your time.




Thx for the tip I will try to make it darker.

I got a strange feling that evrey one ignore my thread.

Hmm... maybe add some grey fog.

The black/red tile is contrasting too much try replacing the black tile with the cracked black tile in the dalaran ruins tileset.

It has too many themes in the building. Try sticking to one and expanding on that.

I like it a lot more now because it's darker.

Good Luck ^_^

thanks, I will try to make that when I get home. And what do u mean with stick with one theme?

It neéds more doodads around the temple and maybe inside, But good as a beginner and its only your third terrain, So its nice as a beginner.
I have seen other beginners and they was worsere. anyway keep the good work.

Thanks! More doodas I make that on sunday.

Could be better but this is okey.. maby.. you should add doodads or something...
anyway this is alright
Siggi

Thats pretty spooky indeed but the inside of it needs some more work, like mabie making the central statue larger and he same statue on the left and right sides of the walls. And the statue on the roof, mabie useing that same statue on the left and right walls of the buildings entrance, just some thoughts

Okey, I will do that.

SORRY FOR DUBBEL POSTING

I edited the map