Anime Knight Girl

Heres another shot at a anime elf.

she hasnt got her weapon yet so dont point it out lol,

compare it to my others in my sig and suggest/crit/comment on anything about her,

your feedback helps me alot =)

thanks,

Btw:

When i scanned her it seemed to take most of the shadings, so keep that in mind

[Moved to concept art forum ;) )

Edit- Edited pic size for your convenience :)

I will have to agree that the pose is pretty bad. I don't know if it is normal in anime, but the face is way too thin. Here is a picture that I think can help with you anatomy.

oh i forgot, heres some tips, when you draw make a skelton at first (looks approximatly like a stickman) then draw what will be the forms, dont go in details just place circle and crap around the skeleton, then you go the details and if you ca afford a 3h pen get one its like $1 or there is box of 4h to 6b for $15

errr.. i guess ill give you some insight...

1. breasts arent shaped right. I noticed that the bottom of the breast is flat.. as if sitting on an invisible table... rather awkward.
2. Torso is wrong. You should try to give her a more hourglass of a figure. pop them hips out, and make the abdomin in general wider.
3. Pose... bleh.... try to be more dynamic/dramatic next time. only way to improve is to draw/practice. i suggest doodling when bored in class.
4. head is slightly misshapened. chin too pointy, and not really anatomically correct.
5. anime face..... sheesh.. dont get me started... i can rant for hours about how i hate anime. i dotn have a problem with people drawing it.. its just not my cup of tea.
6. she seems a bit too skinny... almost anorexic...
7. boots are wrong... the stitching/opening on the boots would be on the front, where the toes are pointing.. not on the insides of the feet.
8. how cute.. u dot your "i's" with a circle..... ^_^
9. thumbnail looks fine.. its just when i click to enlarge that i notice the flaws.

just curious.. how old are u? hopefully your not 30 years old with that drawing ability.... you're prolly in ur early teens maybe????

Practice always makes perfect, the tips peeps gave here should help you out nicly

The big thing that got my attention was she looks so anarexic. Im not good at drawing the human figure but I've come along way and getting it down better by practicing

17 actually, lol

thanks for the help, i only just started to draw before this i wasnt a big drawer thats for sure, im gonna go to art school etc so ive gotta get some practice be i go in there,

most of my drawings ive had them in the position for some reason.

and more suggestions, crits or comments?

heres another one,

(did this one before the others)

apart from the head i know its big did this for a reason)

for some reason my scanner is putting purple on there

iwhat ill do is just draw some hands then legs and then head, to get the right fiqure etc.

thanks for the help guys it helped alot =)

ill post the new one asap (which will be a while)

this one i actually did for Yu Gi Oh, some of the minor details are gone for some reason, but just bare with me (like the detail at the bottom of the page it looks like her legs are bent outward for some reason)

cheers,

okay.. gotta post fast before i go to school....

1. eyes too far up.
2. arms too skinny.
3. her left hand is too small, and the grip on the wand is horrible.
4. still looks very flat and linear.

try drawing from reference. look at a picture and draw it exactly as is. dont trace it.. just draw them, im positive that they will be in a better pose. that way u can increase both ur drawing skill, and work on ur poses... 2 birds w/ 1 stone.

hrm... 17 years old eh? well... taking art classes as a senior in high school isnt going to make u draw that much better. my art teacher just puts stuff in front of us and tells us to paint, or draw. unless u have the basics down, its going to be hard to improve... so get the crackin man... draw draw draw!!!!