Anime Girl #2 (Head pose)

heres another girl in head pose.

Im working on the head for the moment then later ill move on to the whole picture. (once i have practice some more on the legs)

plz give comments/rep/crits and suggestions!

btw: ive transformed the page to front view (it was drawed on a angle)



compare to the ones in my sig!

The ones in your sig look like they came from a porn site.

The girl you drew looks like she has dreadlocks and a fat head, buy a how to draw manga book trust me it'll help a shitload. There's only so much you can get from the anti-manga ametures around here try www.mangarevolutions.com. The only problem is it has a horrible image posting system: you need the pic as well as a thumb nail. But has much better crit givers.

What I have to say is the right eye (our right her left) looks like she's been hit or something, it's too small compared to the other one. I'll hop to hell that little triangle below her neck isn't supposed to be her cleavage becuase it looks a bit like it and is way too high.

There isn't much to drawing faces buddy, gun for the whole character rather then just the head.

okay ill fix her eye,

ill try to get one of those books, though it might take a bit of scouting, lol

the main problem with whole body drawing is that when i draw the hips and below look way outta shape so hopefull i can find this book and fix it.

thanks ravan :) much appriecated.

anymore comments etc?

btw raven: the link doesnt work :-(

cheers

about my sig i search them in image search on yahoo so ill change them whenever i can lol

well heres something i said in your other thread, your lines are too sketchy, just like if were not sure of yourself *which is the hair look like dreadlocks, but i guess a demonstration doesnt hurt so here did this for you...

and sorry i was drawing fast and on me so i missed some stuff >_<