Need feedback, am i that bad?

I colored it 9o_o9 QO_OQ

well, there is some flaws but keep drawing, you have work to do in your coloring, you need to put defenitions on the shape so it doesnt look flat

THX, can u give hints? do you mean highlights?

Your pretty bad :P...draw front on first before side on. Definately keep drawing (assuming u havn't been an avid drawer for years) you'll be able to easily improve.

arent we all?

anyways, do presketching, take the word literally
PRE sketching

Pre-sketch until the forms of the body come naturally to you.

you can find a good example of how to presketch at www.polykarbon.com

And then there's the fact that your sig is too big...

icbm1987

Ok i used the tutorials on that site, and i made a sketchy priestess of the moon, but i was wondereing, what's the next step?

Go in with the detail now... make the figure look more natural and less like a manakin.

Details, details, details...

icbm1987

as a undead servant said:

----------------------------------------yes master-------------------------------'


BTw ur incredibly funny

Way better. Stiff as hell but wateva... Presketch lightly they did it dark so you can see but you hafta make em barely visible only to your artist eye :p
Define her clothes. Add more reallistic curves its pretty obvious imo.

Critic: Head... triangular no good hope u make it more round.
Boobs too high up and dunt need to make circles jst draw em reallistically right away so you can have a better idea of how the clothes will go on them. Thighs and hips shud be a bit larger but doesnt matter.
Keep it up :) and merry christmas!

she's a priestess of a moon, so the armor(on her boobs) works as a pushup Brazier.(BH)

Oh yeah, and btw i inked it with a way 2 thick black brush, so now it's kinda ruined, and ur tips was 2 l8 Yoda/Candy whoever u r.

there is another site that has good tutorials that i have used in the past here

I made some art, and i hope i improved, plz gimme, u know idea and stuff like that.


I know her positure is somehwat odd, so dont bug me with that.



Aszharas Highbourne, i tryed a little sexy positure.






Is this good enough 4 the gallery??

Dude... arms... WHGAAA

I'd have to agree with that statement.