Manga girl full pose WIP

here's another gril in full pose, like to think her body is abit better than the others,

this is her costume over time i will make her look more of a ninja.

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crits/comments and suggestions post em here.

Proportions. Head is too big. Arm and hands too small. Legs, thighs, too. Face is weird: the nose shudnt be like that, the ears are a bit wide, face too triangular but wateva.
Those are obvious errors.
Presketch. Look at anatomy and drawing books. Jst look at the basics. Start off with geometrical shapes and then work on curves and defining the lines. Practice Practice.

Well sumthing more subtle is the pose... legs are plain but arms are better/ more dynamic :). But you should concentrate on getting the basics for now.

Happy Holidays.

Pretty much everything candy said did you check out www.polykarbon.com because the tuts are really quite good.

errr.. candy doesnt really need to ckeck out tutorials at polykarbon... he can draw already...

anyways.. ur proportions are better.. and your pose looks less stiff.. so good for you!(not being sarcastic).. the only crits i have are that the head is a bit too wide and it looks like shes punching herself in the hip. i think the thin arms sorta fits w/ the body type...

i think the link was 4 son of impurity.....

And first step 2 becoming good, is 2 think u really suck, so YOU SUCK!

no offense :) i didn't mean 2 hurt u or anything, you cant improve unless you know u need 2 improve.

Well not really like that. Be Perfectionist and very modest so every1 hates you :p!
Like: sum1 says omg tahts so good you say: yea its crap...
And you gotta always keep in mind theres always better persons than you and you hafta learn from them.
Think: I'm good but not good enough. Har Har.

Merry Christmas!!! lalala

Yah... Negative thinking just results in people not being able to advance further. The willingness to improve and liking your drawings is something thats extremely important in development. If you dont think you can improve, you wont. Oh and of course, dont start in anime, thats an extremely bad idea.

You gotta have the will 2 become better, unless my advice wont work, always say, LOOK AT THAT CRAPPY DRAWING I MADE! LOOK! THE NOOB STRIKES AGAIN!

And my advice is true, i started trying 2 be better after every1 said i was bad, so if i never had done anything, i would draw like i did when i was 12 yrs old.

yea true.

here jsut another installment, here something im working on obviously nowhere finished yet. judt thought id post it up here first and maybe you could help me out with ideas, shes gonna be stealthy and some sort of ninja, ill be changing the pose overtime too.

and i ve got the tutorials off of the polykarbon site.

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i cant seem to get the legs right no matter what tutorials i look at

if anyone can help me with this problem itll be cool,

cheers,

About the legs, make it one straight line on the innerside 2 begin with, make some shapes for arms and joints(errr not drugs n shit) make the wraiste larger, and the boobs a bit smaller, color it black and then ur almost done, i'll post some of the shapes u need.

thanks that'll be great!

anymore feedback.

EDIT-

heres an updated version of the ninja as you can see the hands/arms are just there for show its not really going to be its size.

i drew a quicky of what it should look more like. there might be some probles but its still pritty good, oh and i changed the pose duh.

ur alive!!! lol i can grab myself anywhere i want, but its antisocial behaviour :p


The rest of the body is way too small. Ionno take a new paper.

eww, i dont wanna know where you grab yourself >_<

and well, son of impurity, you got to keep your paper cleaner with nice lines instead of the thick irregular lines around the shapes, other than that, do a pre sketch, help a lot, just some kind of slightly modified stickman, then you place your shape over it, refine the shape to look humanoid then go in details

ill try another soon, i just dont wanna get bored of it =)

ill search around, and ill post one again later.

thanks for all ur help guys!

cheers,

SOI