Ninja Girl Version 2!

Been working on a more original and complex character design.

Starts out with a sketch... the main idea was to make some elaborate costume design and with partial nudity (ionno. felt like goin there) and then I got this powerful sketch, I was heavily inspired by Naruto Universe since I read em online so this is what i got.

(sketch submitted in WDT)

Then I made a new drawing and inked it sloppily. Tried to color it but in vain... I jst wnt a wacom... and coloring talent... lol.



Did this today... while watchin Much Loud Preview hehe... Merry Christmas!



necks a bit weird :( lalalala

huh

your work is like quality sexiness

deaths work is like cool awsomic to the extreme

xmet's is like dont mess with retarded science

i dont know which one i like

anyways....
very nice, clean lines
tho i think the 2nd one lacks clothing folds, not enough!

god i love how u draw clothing w/ all them doodhickies, and whatnots..... so detailed. it'd take me forever to think up, then draw all of them.

anyways.. im not a really big fan of lineart.. but u did good...

still nice as hell...

though, i dont see a lot of improvement from last time. you seem to be repeating the same thingie too much, this way its impossible to get better. if you try something completely diffrent for a couple of drawings, you'll look back at your old style with a fresh vieuw and improve upon it, that is how you get better and better and better.

i never do that though, thats why my style has been stuck for the last two years... but then again meh, i discovered skinning and dont really give a damn lol.

very nice, watch yourself with the sloppy lines (first one) and the two finger need another a half-cm (centimeter) up >-<, the second one is wow... i love the head

I GOT A FRIGGIN WACOM AND YES IM FURIOUS THAT IM NOT IMPROVING! ROAR!

I cant color for shit... :( Now its wacom messing time :)

About improving, here are some tips. I would, instead of trying to jam everything with detail, make things more practical. For the life of me I couldn't understand why she has a little mini towel stashed under her belt. Also, don't be afraid to try new things, lots of the faces you draw look alike. The shading style could use some improvement too. I think what you really need to do is study from life, for anatomy and poses and what not.

i personally like the sketch version of it better. the lines look cleaner in the pencil version, more loose and flowing, while i can see the short stroke method in the inked version. also some anatomy probs with the inked version. neck is wonky. you can fix that easily. i can see that you didn't really have an accurate undersketch for the claw arm, because the claw is not aligned with where the arm would end up. if you lightly sketch in the arm underneath, you'd see that the claw is placed in a spot where the arm would not be able to go given the placement of the sleeve and stuff.

as for improving, try drawing different stuff. like guys. or self portraits. anything that is outside your norm. also try drawing in different styles because you seem to be stuck in this one style right now.

but overall, not bad. keep working and you'll get loads better.

oki dokey¹ im kinda busy now but i read all ur comments thanks alot

NICE SIG BEAM YOU KICKASS

Now I have time to reply. Im sorry for the double post btw.

Yea I'll hafta do life studies to learn more. The cloth thing was not well executed and ended up useless in the end :(. I'll do some Sayuri Anzu drawing lol ><
I'm messing with my wacom now so I'll show you guys a batch of my failed wacom attempts lol.

Happy New Years Everyone! I hope that one of your resolutions is to draw more! :p

heh happy new year, btw if you want something to improve, id say go with THAT you acheived to find your style, now just perfect it, most of your characters seem neutral, put some emotions in it that would be a great improvement