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Need a ending

01-06-2005, 09:31 PM#1
Belphegor666
Ok here is the thing i need a ending for my story but i'm not sure which one to use. So until i decide i want to see what ending would you decide
Story: Old priest revives his love (who was killed) but he makes a mistake and revives
1. A corrupted soul of his loved one
2. Man who killed his love.
01-08-2005, 01:26 AM#2
Candy_Warlock
id say 1 cuz how can you mistaken the assassin of your love and ur love...
one is the most probable way to go since then the character has a inner dispute on how to deal with his corrupted love since he still loves her but she has no such memory of him and tries to kill him.
01-08-2005, 01:35 AM#3
Guest
I agree with Candy Warlock, 1 is the most sensable, I mean wouldn't it be weird having a guy's soul in a girl's body :\
01-08-2005, 12:23 PM#4
Fladian
Agreed, but it would be funny :P
01-08-2005, 02:50 PM#5
Guest
Do the 1st one but then do the 2nd one in a Bloopers Reel ;)

Like Wow..Comedic, Uncanny, Eeerily good, Scary.. :o
01-09-2005, 01:07 PM#6
Belphegor666
Quote:
Originally Posted by Belphegor
2. Man who killed his love.
Well actualy person who killed his wife is a woman (Uupps :( ) I just didn't know how to say this without revealing too much.
And btw i the 1. is my first guess, but it seems to me that the 2. would be a better choice now.
01-09-2005, 10:34 PM#7
Guest
2. Reminds me of a comedy and i get a slight feeling thats not the effect you were hoping for...

..but oh well..ur choice really...