The Age of Sorrow

This is the map which i've been working on for several months... Its gameplay is like gameplay, with neednig castles\barracks to get more men.

I have this thing for explaining to much, so read if u wish.

It's about a realm called Elnoran, which is troulbed by war and strife. In an earlier age of the realm, the elves of the northern part tapped into chaos magic, and wreaked havoc on the rest of their kindreds. They were exiled from the rest of the elven society and were called their division was Exiled Elves, but were refered to "Exiles". They allied the fel orcs, who in turn taught them how to summon demons, and their lord Merelnarl.

Some feedback would be good
^_^
edit: and sorry for picture, i had some trouble with it. I'll change it a bit later...
edit 2: i'll get a pic soon

So?

New races? What are you supposed to do in this map? And you definately didn't tell too much..

There's 2 teams, the good side, and evil side (of course). You have to desroy red's area if your evil or brown's area if ur good. You have to train castles to get more men so u can accomplish your task.

Do you plan to have new models or will you use Warcrafts ones? And how big is the map going to be? Battle.net or a singleplayer?

theres lots of new models, but there's still lots of warcraft models and its multiplayer 6 good vs 5 evil, so its for battle net.
here's 1 of them:

Could you post more screenshots? I need something more for you to get my intrest.

EDIT: Nice, but I'd like to see more of the 'game' screenshots.

Lots of custom models can and will make the download for other players much longer, having lots of custom models isn't always a good idea with a battle.net map.

I'm a little confused what type of map is this exactly? Is it an Altered Melee, an AoS, what is it exactly? As Albiino-I said already the information you have provided is very little, you didn't meantion that much, you didn't meantion the gameplay of the map, the type of the map, you really only said the name and a story.

Its fairly hard to give feedback on so little information but what I can tell you is that this seems fairly interesting, interesting enough to get me to think about it. In the screenshot you gave it looks like the only tile you used was the dirt tile, some tile varriation would be nice as would some doodads, even battlefields have small clumps of grass and tiny bits of shrubbery.

So far this looks like a nice project, I'm going to keep an eye on it.

its like ringwars. (gameplay and all) I'll consider what you said jetpack. Itstill needs to be tested and all. And for the pic, that was the intro for it, its a barren battle field.

here's some in game screenies. Here's Humalen, a hero for the good side, and the true king of Elnoran. ^_^

It's ok.

But nothing more. Sorry to say, but I'v seen hundreds of this kind of maps.. I don't mean to insult you, it's always good to get more experience like this, but when this is ready, try to get some original idea.

yeah, i kno, i just wanted to test myself to see if how good i was at triggering.
edit: it's pretty much done. i'll release it if people want to be out.
edit2: i'll add a little release or sumthing... one of the elven knight models. enjoy

i'm done now, so i can start something new, since i can do the required triggers ^_^
enjoy, i'll change this if any1 wants me to I'll have to email it or send in on msn, because it's to big

I encourage you to split up text into more managable pieces. A lot of text is hard to read and a major turn off. Looks good though.