Craptastic... just craptastic

There, ive done some cartoony crap stuff
so i dont like i draw like death
unless you guys still say i do



some realism
then i realized i suck at realism

Ok, it's really... craptastic... That alien (or whatever it is) head under the orc head on the right is very nice. The rest... you need to improve. Practice is the key. Never give up.

Salutions®

cartoony crap! yeay!!

ok updated now
the first one was just some cartoony crap
then theres realism
the reffed ones were ok... not really
then the non-reffed ones suck
i gotta practice some more

It's good you have a reffed one in there, but I'd like to see a lot more life drawings from you. Just keep drawing like Mara said.

The "TWAK!" scene is a good sketch to develope, i think.

Salutions®

lol you choose my doodles over the other crap
oops forgot the h, it was suppose to be thwack

ill keep that in mind, i think its the crosshatching shading thats not working
and i did try to look at real life
to an extent
"oh snap!"

Indeed, cross-hatching is not in and of itself inherently evil, but it can easily be abused to the detriment of the subject. Your cross-hatching there really flattens out those shapes. There's nothing at all wrong with cross-contour or lateral lines, and when you apply them in such a way that they describe the form, they can add character to your linework.

On another note, I've been wondering what is that faded grey T shape in the middle of all your papers. Is it like a watermark, something on your scanner glass, or maybe it's on the other side of the paper you're drawing on?

oh, you see my scanner has this negative slide on the "ceiling"
so when i scan, the light goes THROUGH the paper, hits the dark colored slide holders, and it gets included
ill scan the scanner if you want

nice, i llike the comic-y style, but why is hawk girl in trouble? just thinking about it gives me an aneurism.