Story...

Well, I am doing a solo cin (well whit one of my friends helping me on the story)
the story credit goes to timothor...
I just want suggestions to make it better and/or feedback ^_^

Story:
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Dark times hit the lands, and plague tortures the people. Bandits have started to rally, and orc armies invade.
The bandits have united under three leaders, the purpose, to outlast their enemies, the Orcs and Humans.
Something strange is going on though. Old magics are rising... there may be a new evil coming
The bandits' three leaders are suspicious of eachother and want command over the whole force themselves.
Yet one of the three makes sure they do not kill eachother before the time is right.
All need to live if the enemy is to be defeated.
The new evil is thanks to the plague, while Humans, Orcs, and Bandits fight it, the plaque will surface and change the destiny of the bandit lords.
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Accepted suggestions: (give 3 suggestions to appear on the credits)
JetPack = ||


*Will update it soon...*

This doesn't look so much as a story but more as an introduction to a story or a map description.

I have a lot of suggestions for you.
These lines could all be transformed into one sentance and have a more interesting feel to it, maybe like this....

Tha bandits have united under three leaders, the purpose, to outlast their enemies, the Orcs and Humans.
This last sentance is very confusing in the way it has been written, maybe more like this.

The new evil is thanks to the plague, while Humans, Orcs, and Bandits fight it, the plaque will surface and change the destiny of the bandit lords.

The end of the sentance is very strangely written and did my best to understand it, if this is not what you meant please modify the sentance to be more clear.

Overall this seems like an ok story, it could be better, but that would mostly involve adding of more details, which means you should lengthen the story a little.

How about saying somthing other than "the humans" as bandits are humans themselves (at least the ones from the original wc3) say the human kingdoms or somthing like that instead.

well this time it wasnt I who wrote the story so its not my fault ^_^
and btw, it is an introduction on the story... I just dont have it all...
and jetpack those were nice suggestions..., thanks :)