My second Attempt

Im not really sure what My product is, but I started wanting to make an evil/undead mage from the "humanmage.blp".

This is my second skin attempt.

Unfortunately the images are slightly blurred (blast you WC3 Viewer!).
And the in game screen shots were too dark :(

Positive and Negative feedback is wanted, post anything you want about it!!! ^_^

Thanks for taking the time to reply to my skin. Firstly, I see that most of the skin (clothing except for the texture and hair) is recolor. I'm not too sure about the face, but it could use some shading. Secondly, you might want to make the red texture areas on the clothing more organized. Thirdly, the face needs to be touched up. The lips stick out a little bit; and if it's a bloody mouth you were attempting, you could make it seem bloodier.

ok thanks, I was planning to add shading to his face but im yet to get to that, i was a little edgy about the mouth too, and now i have a second opinion it will be changed! also i plan to re-skin his staff next, I think i might make it more extravagant, maybe a metallic black look with tribal silver details?¿? And i also belive ill go back over the coat, i still want to keep blizzard's gold edging though so ill change the coat other than that. Sound good? this is just brain storming so my next update my vary.....*leaves to skin*

Rep

kinda, fix the lips, retexturise the face and the cape.

Anway it looks really great, keep it up.

Needs shading, and a bit less lipstick is also nice. But i like the cape.

Btw, decrease the size of your sig, it's to big. Please limit to 500×500 pixels thank you.

Oh and Zer0-, you can blame blurryness on Wc3 because its true.

Erm....my sig is 500x314 thank you

WTF zero!!!! bad rep becuase i said WC3 viewer blurred it? look at the blue around it, even thats blurred......and i gave you a good rep too.....your not meant to be reppin me on what i think blurred it, your meant to be repping me on my work.

Only your pic, but spaces and text are also counted. And you placed your pic in the middle so it above 500.

ok i see i'll fix it! sorry

EDIT: fixed i think thats less than 500.

No no no no!
the skin texturing is all wrong.

shade boy Shade!!

lips are way too big and monotone. use many shades of a colour.

change the clothes look at pictures of clothes etc and draw them. its just a recolour at the moment.

BUT its nothing that cant be changed.

hang in there practice shading and colour techniques.

good luck!


BTW: pick a theme for the mage i know you want him evil but what kind of evil?

a chaotic evil that will slaughter anyone?

or a evil that has a heart deep within.

choose his evil pic the clothes that would match it (e.g a dark coat and hood)

wc3v doesn't make it blurry, it stretches it, you should be happy i told you that it was me, many people are cowards and is afraid of saying that they repped. Just showing a good rep example, and NEway i repped you first.

I have nothing against you, so drop it.

no i meant i repped you good on your skins, i didnt rep the post in this thread. And i still dont see how you belive its a good rep example, either way the program distorts the image .

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Thanks Son-Of-Impurity! Thats the best helpful critique anyone has ever given me!
Im still working on the skin so i should have an update sometime soon, im not sure how long though.

(P.S. Love That shot of Mick in your avatar!)

Bla bla, rep doesn't do anything. The only thing that it does is when you have 10 points, you can give 1 rep too. If you have 50 you can change your title below your username, and for every 100 rep you get another block. But if it means so much for you 2 ill give you both some rep so we can drop this thing.

hehe thanks i try to give good crits and comments,

ya mick is cool.

heres some rep to help you on ur way.

lol, I want the thingy under my name, I make goals!.......fine I feel left out.....

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And in the wise words of "player_72985". - END OF DISSCUSSION -


*demands the reposting of the 'Mick' avatar.* ;)

*cough*overreacting*cough*