oh well... heres some goodies

Yes i was on Troy Game project as a concept artist but the recent stuff that happened make me on standby, what really happened is that Troy got a forum and a team, a guy joined, 36 years old with a full project, he entered the team, became the leader the day after, decided to close the project we work on with the team, create a new forum, took the programmers with him, pretty sure he kicked out all the other designers and well i have the feeling he dont like me so im on stand by waiting to know if he take me on his team or not... what actually happened is that he come with a total project of his creation, i gave my opinion when he wanted ous to design the characters like he want, what first was supposed to be an original project with originals characters became a DnD project with a good rip off of all the other games... so right now, i have no idea of what happening so ill post the work i did... must say i took 4 hour each of theses to actually think and make something creative to get kicked out and pretty unhappy

This is some kind of mage design, i didnt finished the shading since it was late and i had school


This one is a young Princess Warrior of some kind

hrm... i dunno about all this asymetrical stuff. a little bit of it is good, but when u do too much, it looks a bit offbeat.

1. the proportions on the girl seem to be fine. its just that shes in a very awkward pose.
2. her wrist seems weird. its slanted inward, which would have been find for some light dagger of some sort, but i dont think she'd be able to support a heavy sword w/ that hand motion.
3. Cloth shading isnt too good on either pic. not that many folds in their clothing. the only place that have folds are the sash on the mage, and those are off. try looking at some cloth items.. scrunch up a shirt or two and look at them for reference
4. the design on the mage's robe looks too random, and doesnt really fit anything else he's wearing.

everything looks too confusing and doesnt match what they are wearing. the girl is fine for the most part, except for the pose. im just a bit iffy on the mage w/ his asymmetrical theres-something-about-mary hair.

Hey I'm supposed to do princess! very creative stuff you got there... I'll be stealing that thank you lol.

no really i am... :)

^-^ thats what i was aiming for creativity over quality

and worm, you know i suck iat shading :P ill do better next time and get something good

:P
creativity over quality is good once in a while
but for some reason
your drawings look flat
i dunno why

its the second picture, may be the girl facing you with the raised leg that looks flat

ah yea, i think its the shitty pose and shading too...

have you been presketching?

for the mage yes, for the girl, everthing except that leg which is off, she was in a diffenrent pose but it sucked and i needed to see his boot since it was a concept