High elven elementalist WIP

please give constructive criticism :)

the hand is like..... i think you messed up on it a lot for some reason

and the ear is like.... too small and too far up and it looks flat too

Nice pic, but if she is an elementalist where are her ubar magic skillz? Put some fire or sumthing around her hand. Otherwise perfect.
P.A

one more thing the hair seems.... kinda random, like flowing random directions

Mmm, yes the right hand looks a bit flat, you may want to disalign the fingers maybe. And of course the hear is too small and a bit too up i think. I really like the rest though. The pose is nice, the hairs too, the face is very clean without heavy detail and gives that 'simple beauty' look that fits a lot in an elf theme. Will you color her? ^^

I think I will, I'll have holidays in 1 weeks, and then I'll have enough time for a good coloring. At the moment I fixed the problem of the ear and the left hand, but I can't do anything for the right hand... Do you know where I can find a picture of hand in this position?

yea
your right hand
check it out in a mirror

Whoa! Nice one!
The head size is ok, but the ear still isn't how it's suppused to be, and the hands look wierd. Follow SS's advice and position you hand like that or ask someone else to stand in that pose. It makes drawing alot easier ^^

I think her left hand looks a little small compared to her right hand - even when you take into account that one is a clenched fist. I like the pose though, and the elven elegance is there. The ear doesn't appear to be in the correct position though. Since she is an elven elementalist, some effects would fit well - maybe like around or coming from her left hand? Otherwise she just looks like a normal elven villager sort of thing.

Overall very nice, and with the fixes suggested by all, it will look great.

well no new critics, the hand needs work but the rest of it is lovely, congrats on the face, well done

Hopefully I aslo posted on conceptart.org, so I finally got there some helpfull critics. The linear picture is now nearly fnished.

I asked to constructive criticism. There are in this thread 2 interesting comments, and a lot of spam, or useless things, and even some absurd things. And about you, wormskull, what you said is among the absurd things.



The comments on Conceptart.org were always usefull or interesting.
Y'a pas photo.

People don't reply to my thread when I made one there... at conceptart.org... I also don't comment alot... I barely go just went before for DSG but now its dead-like.
Too add to the criticism, arms are too thin and seem unreallistic cuz of the muscle structure. The folds need work but you're on the right path. Keep it up!

lol yea im stuck to theses comments too, btw stormrage once you will actually correct and be able to hide the bigass flaws, then we shall go in details, for now the hands are like the first part that hit our eyes, the rest of the anatomy is ok, maybe the forearm could be better i dunno, other than that like i said its ok

btw its always good to get spam over nothing, it show that someone actually care about you. dont forget your on a warcraft modding forum after all, were not all elites like ogre

Ok, ok, I'm sorry. Next time I won't ask for construtive criticism... :8