Samples of Laz

Muoteck wants me to post... so I will post a few things, but some ground rules.


1. if you don't like a pic, but don't have something constructive to say - don't comment...

2. no one-two word comments, like cool or nice - if you do like something, actually say what you like

3. those who actually have constructive criticism - don't hold back - speak




ok, note - most are a bit old. The orignals can be found on my sites - if you can find them...

1. My Predator - in color
2. My Elite - did it randomly - but it resembles Halo's Elite (old)
3. Ember - Comission for an RPG
4. Centium Core - one of my own character creations for a mod I'm planning
5. Kenshin - another of my own creations (old - completely by wacom - first time wacom use)
6. Cavalry VTOL skin - for a Battletech mod
7. Forgotten Planet - old planet pic
8. Warcraft Erotic Anthology Cover - the cover for my WC hentai dojin
9. 2 Elves V2 - remake of my second pic I ever put online - which was here (old)
10. Maiev and Naisha Kissing - a clip from the WC dojin

11. Sorceress pinup - for my WC dojin (based on Rain's sorceress pic)
12. Farewell Sylvanas - a remake of my very first pic online - which was here (old)
13. Naga Censored - Comissioned for an RPG
14. Lit and Loth Censored - A request for Xmetallium (old)
15. Kiki Censored - A recent quick sketch/coloring

Mhh... You're good at coloring. Your style is pretty cartoony, personnally I don't really like it, but it's just a personnal opinion. Your art is seriously missing details. You need to put more details, really more, and it'll be a lot better. At least I think...
Mhh... You're good.
The artworks of the second post are, I think, better. The anatomy is well respected, there's some little problems, but not too much... Like in the other arts, the colors are too hard, too flashy... and it lacks of details...
Good job...

For me, i like 12 the best. The overall composition is better, as well as the coloring. I'm not a big fan of the dodge, burn, smudge for coloring, but that seems to be your style, which is respectable.

some of your characters look stiff, and not very animated. Maybe adding different shades of colors to skin tones, or a different source of lighting would make it more dynamic. That is probably why i like 12 more than the others... there are a larger range of colors on the skin, as well as the clothing, than on the others.

the coloring on the scales for number 13 are weird. scales have ridges, and arent necessarily a smooth, slick surface.. they are stacked on top of eachother, or there are grooves between them. They way you colored it made it look rather plastic. But the face is good.. reminds me of some of Jacinthe's faces..

the light source in number 2 isnt too consistent

try experimenting w/ coloring... and branch out of dodge/burn/smuding once and a while.... you might like it. Little short on time.. so ill finish commenting on the other pics later.. but i like what i see so far..

nubmer 11,12 and 13 because
11 - read number 13
12 - what fnug said
13 - not as stiff and more creative than the others

you seem to do water pretty well

the old stuff ive seen already so i wont say much on those

Sechy Sechy Sechy... We want you in the bikini babe contest! Check the sticky at the top! It will bring happyness to my heart if you do. GREAT PICS!
P.A

Wow that is very good coloring but like SRJ said it lacks detail. My favorite is the predator (#1) but I also noticed you seem to draw women with big breasts very nicely also worth a mention is that UT2k4 model (#6) which is very good would be fun to watch the faces of the enemies when they see a payload of missiles coming to kill em :8 . The planet (#7) seems to look like it was woven onto a cloth and to be completely made up of water. #14 is probably the worst though because there is so little detail. Keep up all the good work I hope we can see more of your art.

StormrageJunior: You say it lacks details, but you don't mention what kind - your cgs aren't detailed... your pics seem to have detail in the sketch - but loses something in the coloring (which I've been told often in my works). What, I'm not supposed to color bold or flashy? and what specificly about it makes it no detail?

FatUglyNakedGuy: The reason for the stiffness is I only render the character in a single lighting - I 'm not rendering a scene - it's a quickly done - more so like a concept.
As for 13 - I did what the client wanted... - and I do not see a resemblance in the face compared to some of Jacinthe's works...
For 12 - I did branch out into various colors, but I combined it with dodge/burn and smudge...
I would - but I always rush through pics - I don't have anything that I really want to work on that would have me want to spend time on my works.

PlasticAngel: Um... no - and it would not give me anything pleasant...

Savage Nation: Again - how is it lacking detail? The model is for ut2004, it was for a Battletech mod. 14 is the oldest one I've posted - it's from before I left...
and no... I will not be continuing to post my art here. This was a one time thing.

The only way your seeing anything more from me is if you go to one of the sites I post on or my personal site...

Wormskull: I've never seen a pic of Maiev w/o that mask she wears - besides it's young Maive (10000+ years prior to where she is seen in the game)
I've never drawn a lot of hentai - personally I prefer a story over just straight sex. I actually started this Hentai Comic cuz Rain suggested it.

No, I do have lots more stuff, I just picked a small handful. And, actually they are rushed - even the ones with backgrounds - all my work is done quick. The majority of my sketches are never even finished before I start coloring them - the coloring itself I do as fast as I can (partly cuz if I don't finish quick I will let it lay almost indefiantely), and the closer I am to finishing the cg the faster I begin to rush it.

I didn't forget the img tags - I didn't bother to do them.

The very first time I met/talked to you, you called me an asshole on some thread that did not have anything to do with me or you - I never did anything to you! And when I said you where rude, you cussed me out, spamed my thread with grotesque pics... and when ever they let you back on while I was gone - you flame me for an old pic I did in my old even more quicker cg stlye...

"""The very first time I met/talked to you, you called me an asshole on some thread that did not have anything to do with me or you - I never did anything to you! And when I said you where rude, you cussed me out, spamed my thread with grotesque pics... and when ever they let you back on while I was gone - you flame me for an old pic I did in my old even more quicker cg stlye..."""

thats wormskull in a can
he does that to EVERYBODY!!!
yea.....

see?
told ye

plus why should i "turst" you ws?

Always thought you must be a pretty talented skinner, what type of projects besides the one you mention have/do you skin for.

Also I noticed that a lot of your pictures use a texture overlay somewhere(usually on the fabric). Do you have a specific program or website you go to to get these textures or do you just search for them on the internet.

I know what you mean about coloring being a tedious task, I generally tried to finish everything I do in one sitting cause I don't think I'll be able to come back to it later with the same intensity and use the same techniques.

um i dont see anything wrong with the style, i like it like that, it got some power and it is pretty stylish, coloring are good for sure, i especially like Kiki high tigh boots upper part, i think its get messy around the ankle however

sounds funky to make a warcraft hentai art book, i never really tried hentai since childs and my parents look in my sketchbooks but it might be a good idea to try this once i will be in appartement

Bah, the pics in my gallery are actually quite bad, but I'm working hard to improve. Wait 3-4 months, I'll be ready. I said "details", and I meant all sort of details: textures, details of shading, reflections, etc... all what your pics haven't. The problem of your art, is that I see only a lineart and ranges of a few colors. It looks empty. It's quite hard for me to explain, since english isn't my language...
The other problem of your pics, is, like I already said, that the coors are too flashy, not natural enough... If you look at the paintings of an artist like H.Lyon, I think you'll see what I mean... His colors are very realisitc. http://www.howardlyon.com/main.htm

man, these are preaty good, too bad that not many people like anim (hentai) styles, unlike me
and i realy liked that predator (as a fan of the pred i am)

antihero: I have skinned for Spatial Fear (A UT99 single playler mod - all the new creature skins and remake of the main character), I've done various skin for UT99 custom models (mainly rog "666" bacon's Abbey model - butI've goteen more recognition for my reskins for the Bubblegum Crisis models - may join the the ut2k4 mod) all of which are on skincity @ beyondunreal.com, I reskinned all the skins for the Lady Chaos model for ChaosUT 2k4 (currently replaces old ones as default in the current build), and I'm current;y working on the CXP for UTXMP.

for the texture overlays - I use built in, internet, and I create my own...

Saboera: Making hentai is kinda different... though it has helped me to draw direct character interactions, and I've done a lot of pose that you'd would not see, or normally draw in ordinary pics... - and surprisingly - communities that allow adult art, or specialize in it have been for more nicer bunch than I've had here.

StormrageJunior: I take it you hate anime, huh? If you cannot see that the pics I've shown have anime type qualities... none of these pics did I make to be 100% realistic like. I do it that way for speed - I do not want to sit around for several weeks to work on one damn pic. Plus I have no goal or necessity to create one like that - it's not that I'm not capable of it or lack enough skill - it's a choice.

TheReaper: ok, yeah - I get the feeling most people here now dislike anime completely...



Note to all: To those who gave me a rep - why? what does it do? It's not worth a thing... plz do not waste time giving rep to me the outcast and non-community participant...

And now, I'm going to go back to work on a bukkake pic for this cute asian girl (well lady) and OMFG it's not colored like any of these~!